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MrMonkeyDeamon
12-12-2011, 08:25 AM
ok i had other go. and yes i really should watch some tuts XD

1st death
http://oi43.tinypic.com/rqyote.jpg


2nd t.v head
http://oi42.tinypic.com/16bloci.jpg


sorry if the suck. this is only my 2nd time

MrMonkeyDeamon
12-12-2011, 10:00 AM
alien. oh crap i spelt it long D:

http://oi42.tinypic.com/14y36rt.jpg

:odey:
12-12-2011, 10:41 AM
The 'alian' is quite cool, haha :P

All of them definitely have something about them, the only thing that's lacking, is shading!

I think shading dramatically improves any alt, so maybe watch some shading tuts and you'll be well on your way!

The small 'death' looks cool too :)

karter
12-12-2011, 12:41 PM
I like em. You can enter StrayPixels on habbo.com when it starts :p

Eric
12-12-2011, 12:51 PM
The god of death looks pretty cool :P But you need some shading on it.

Samantha
12-12-2011, 01:13 PM
I think you need to refer back to your other thread and take member's advice into consideration. We spoke to you about line art and shading so work on that and improve on your original piece before starting something new. Maybe try enlargements to get your line art upto scratch then work on alterations to do your shading then bring the two skills together.

I don't like the alteration's you've done, the grim reaper just looks like a black blob if I'm honest and I don't see much shading at all. The tele head person needs line art working on especially on the cloak area and the alien is too flat so you need to make the head more round. :)!

Edit: You need to use a darker green to shade the alien not grey tones. Hope I helped.

ShazzyBee
12-12-2011, 03:15 PM
These are pretty good for a second time, you need to work on your line art and shading though, but the idea of them are rather creative.

Hollie
13-12-2011, 09:38 AM
I quite like the alien. Definitely needs more shading though! :P

MrMonkeyDeamon
13-12-2011, 10:05 AM
I quite like the alien. Definitely needs more shading though! :P


yer i think ill watch some tuts on that!

Andii
13-12-2011, 03:09 PM
mmm im not really fussed on them tbh. . the black death thing to me looks to dark and well like a blob :( sorry but its just what i think . . . also the alien looks not bad lol i like the brain bit in it ;) and

I LOVE THE TV HEAD haha woop it reminds me of LMFAO ;)

twinart
14-12-2011, 07:47 AM
Not bad. But next time, just save your work in .PNG & upload it to the better pics uploader such as imm.io (http://imm.io)

JerseySafety
14-12-2011, 09:30 AM
umm they are alright, although I do think you need a lot more practice but you will become good.

quality isn't very good, as Vigas said upload as .png

Succubus
14-12-2011, 05:41 PM
Needs some more shading, but the overall its not to bad :)

garriet
14-12-2011, 09:08 PM
I quite like them - haven't really seen any like that before. Just a few improvements though - you need more shading as others have said, and you should save the picture as PNG because it comes out better quality! :)

Rainbow
16-12-2011, 07:55 AM
I like the death one, but as others said you need to add more shading to them :-)

Smurfed-
31-12-2011, 02:21 PM
theres are pretty good, I like the tv head one :)

TheCasualSpy
31-12-2011, 08:09 PM
I like the tv head and alien one very much welldone :D

Cian
02-01-2012, 09:36 PM
shading would make them better!

iFlame
02-01-2012, 10:18 PM
They are alright, they need however to be tidied up alittle but apart from that they are really good.

the.games
02-01-2012, 10:33 PM
I think that they're really cool, mate. +Rep for you me thinks!

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