Song In Progress

[Milarz]

http://soundcloud.com/dj-jmiller/songpreviewjmiller

First time using FL Studio, so not the best, but not to bad.

Couple of mess up's, so far:

1. The first 15 seconds of the song i kinda stuffed up. I could have fixed it, but was little to late as i already exited the program.

2. Could have faded a couple of tunes .. instead of just bursting out, not sounding the best.

After the 3 2 1 Countdown, that's when a little singing will start. I'll be singing, but will be edited & changed to a chicks voice.

This is basically a stuff around beat/song just to see how everything works. Track will hopefully be completed in the next 48 hours. Then i can finally get the singing part in.

[twinart]

Not bad, I love it abit.

[Milarz]

After this, gonna make my own version of We Will Rock You. Gonna be played at live DJ shows if it's good enough.

[Jurv]

It just sounds like a few different effects put together randomly, it's not that good imo.

I've not got a clue how you can make it better because I've never used that programme before, it needs to flow together more though if you know what I mean? haha.

[Jazz]

I agree with what [@]@Jurv[/@] says, its a bit all over the place imo

[Andeeh]

It's a try but as others said you need to know what direction the song is heading as at the moment it sounds a bit wishy washy. Have you downloaded any other packs as the standard kick/snares/effects arent the best on FL. Also what tempo do you have it at? and also try using Sytrus if you haven't already you can create some pretty decent synths for the song.

[geo]

I agree with [@]@Jurv[/@]
I would try thinking more about what you want the song to sound like, then try working on it. It's a little.. erm I'm not really too sure how to describe it but I don't think it all fits very well. Nice try, I just think you've got to improve quite a bit. Good luck with it. :)

[beth]

nothing original, or interesting i'm afraid. sounds like it's been done before.

[peteyt]

The question you need to ask is would you dance to it. If it's a dance track, imagine it in a club. I sadly couldn't imagine anyone dancing to that track. Like a few have mentioned it hasn't really got structure.

[Milarz]

It's more of a radio edit than a club edit.

[TheCasualSpy]

you do need to make it flow better but it got a lot better as it went on imo.

[peteyt]

It's more of a radio edit than a club edit.

But even so most songs you hear for radio play have some beat that would want you to dance, rock out etc.