bunny le black market

[David]

WOOO PROUD OF MYSELF.

http://mattgarner.net/upload/images/0sucF.png

Could I also have some suggestions on how to improve it? Cheers!

[:odey:]

I actually really like that, haha :)

The bit that he's holding out looks slightly out of proportion though to me :(

Looks huge compared to the size of the actual coat, haha :)

I love the coat overall though :)

[David]

I actually really like that, haha :)

The bit that he's holding out looks slightly out of proportion though to me :(

Looks huge compared to the size of the actual coat, haha :)

I love the coat overall though :)

the easter bunny can do magical things with coats ;) fnx

[kitten]

wow, that's so good! omg

[geo]

Haha, that's pretty good Dave! I like it. :)

[Cerys]

Looks nice!

But the jacket is exactly the same as the one on a retros staff application image. It looks like if you did get it off of that, which I'm not saying you did, all you couldve done was insert the bunny image and replace the items ;) It still takes skill to put the bunny in there etc!!

http://oi42.tinypic.com/s1oyh0.jpg


Either way, it's still amazingly good!!!
Welldone, and good work as always from you :) xx

[auffant1]

Lol I like it, looks funny. But cool at the same time.

[Jurv]

it's simple, but effective. well done dave! :)

[David]

Looks nice!

But the jacket is exactly the same as the one on a retros staff application image. It looks like if you did get it off of that, which I'm not saying you did, all you couldve done was insert the bunny image and replace the items ;) It still takes skill to put the bunny in there etc!!

http://oi42.tinypic.com/s1oyh0.jpg


Either way, it's still amazingly good!!!
Welldone, and good work as always from you :) xx

I did :P not an expert at alts yet, working on it :D
thanks guys

[beth]

totes cute, he looks a bit fat though, SLIM HIM DOWN.

[AlexJRiley]

I love it! but maybe some shorts or a speedo? but then it wouldnt be correct to bunnies who dont wear clothes... your call though

[Kasabian]

But the jacket is exactly the same as the one on a retros staff application image. It looks like if you did get it off of that, which I'm not saying you did, all you couldve done was insert the bunny image and replace the items ;) It still takes skill to put the bunny in there etc!!


And that image is taken from an old habbo homepage image, which is what Dave used ;).

As for the alt, I think you should shade the inside near his outstretched arm, to seem as if it's going round the back of him, and you should do a light shade the bit that comes over his tummy. The carrots/eggs look really flat/2d, so maybe some shading under them too?

Aside from that it's a good edit, just need to work on shading!

[Cerys]

And that image is taken from an old habbo homepage image, which is what Dave used ;).



Ooh, my bad then!

And yeah, I agree that shading could be better.

[David]

ok changed the pocket and added shading with toms help :D!

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/097/6/2/habbo_easter_bunny_visits_the_black_market__by_dav idpaterson-d4vawdn.png

[Andii]

lol why is he so fat :O :O loool nice work dave :D it looks well took me a few minutes to figure out they were easter eggs =]

[Succubus]

Looks great!
Simple but fab, lovely work you have there :)

[David]

I love it! but maybe some shorts or a speedo? but then it wouldnt be correct to bunnies who dont wear clothes... your call though

dunno. cant see a bunny in speedos/shorts :P


lol why is he so fat :O :O loool nice work dave :D it looks well took me a few minutes to figure out they were easter eggs =]

cause all he eats is easter eggs, duuhh :(


thanks for the feedback guys :D

[Andii]

ooooooooooooooooooo lol i thought he did a black market and trade them ;) lol

btw you should have like a street alley as background ;)

[David]

oooooooooooh nice idea might add one later

[garriet]

i think its really good, definitely goes well with the current easter theme, there's nothing really that i can say you need to improve on! :) x

[Aaron]

Wow that's actually really good. Great job! :)

[SackRace]

Pretty good! xo

[Seikou]

looks really cool, well done :-)

[NeverSkem]

WOW! Very Artistic ^_^

[dbgtz]

WOOO PROUD OF MYSELF.

http://mattgarner.net/upload/images/0sucF.png

Could I also have some suggestions on how to improve it? Cheers!

The shading on the eggs doesn't make them seem round, just more like a bit sticking out and then it goes flat. You should try and apply some shading which would make it look round. Since I cannot describe it, here is a very bad example on the right:
http://i39.tinypic.com/4lhdsy.png

The left one is basically a slightly exaggerated version of what you are doing.

[David]

The shading on the eggs doesn't make them seem round, just more like a bit sticking out and then it goes flat. You should try and apply some shading which would make it look round. Since I cannot describe it, here is a very bad example on the right:
http://i39.tinypic.com/4lhdsy.png

The left one is basically a slightly exaggerated version of what you are doing.

yeah i fixed the shading :P

http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=743642&p=7490487#post7490487

[dbgtz]

yeah i fixed the shading :P

http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=743642&p=7490487#post7490487

The eggs are identical in that link and the original which is what I was referring to.

[David]

The eggs are identical in that link and the original which is what I was referring to.

RIGHT OK didnt click on, will open it up later and see what i can do :d thanks for the feedback :P

[Ellz]

haha thats really cute, well done :D

[Mollie]

I like it :D perhaps put some texture on his chest, it looks a bit flat and empty... but apart from that it's great!

[Jazz]

awwh well done, its cute!

[David]

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

http://mattgarner.net/upload/images/cga2o.png

[Kyle]

much better :) prefer the dithering on the carrots, gives them some depth

[David]

thanks kyle :P

[GregSegesi]

The way his left hand goes into the pocket looks weird and the shading on the carrots and eggs look off too. It looks like as if there isn't any shading at all. Try giving the carrots some carrot-y texture, and shade the eggs.

[David]

The way his left hand goes into the pocket looks weird and the shading on the carrots and eggs look off too. It looks like as if there isn't any shading at all. Try giving the carrots some carrot-y texture, and shade the eggs.

is this based on the OP or the updated one 3rd above yours?

[GregSegesi]

is this based on the OP or the updated one 3rd above yours?

Oops, I didn't read through the entire thread. The updated version is much better!

[David]

Oops, I didn't read through the entire thread. The updated version is much better!

thanks :D!

[Boggart]

THAT IS SO DAMN HOT