My first FL Studio Song

[FiftyCal]

lol i think its crap check it and give me feedback

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[David]

DING DONG HERRO

should have put in it somewhere, "ooh baby do me pixels"
sounds good tbh without the words, but i'm no expert :P

[Andeeh]

For a first song not to bad, get rid of the talking cause it does suck with that. I would say try and create variation on the percussion. Just wondering for the part at 1.05 did you put a filter on it? if so nicely done. Maybe try and change it up as it is repetitive but well done. Did you use the mixer and do any EQ'ing? if so that would be where to go next.
This is part of track i'm working on at the moment
http://soundcloud.com/andeeh/mr-m-a-d-take-to-the-stage