my first kinda 'edit/alt'

[Jazz]

as its the habbox olympics and all that jazz, i thought id have a crack at making some olympic gfx to go with my team haha. im very new to alts and edits so any cc would be great :-P

sorry i cut the top of his head off, but its not the head i focused on it was the uniform:
http://gyazo.com/de0b1e2658ddccad46793b2db627d293.png?1340102799

original pic:
http://www.habbox.com/images/calvin/archive/images/characters/callie/mud.gif
(this isnt mine btw if you didnt know)

:¬:

[Jssy]

Personally I love the first one best because I like the shading on the trousers better :P

[Samantha]

Better than dome peoples first, it's simple and ok. I think shading is dark in some places but not bad.

[lawrawrrr]

It's good for a first! Where you've copied the one of callie though, the splotches on her trousers wouldn't need shading in (on the copy) so that's why it looks like it has really dark splotches. If you got rid of them (or at least made them lighter) it'd look rly good!

Nice job jazz!

[Ellz]

i actually quite like it, love the colours. Only thing is the shading on the trousers looks odd :/

[Succubus]

Great one Jazz. But as others have stated the trousers are a bit funny looking as of the dark blotches (where the mud was?)

[Seikou]

it looks good to me, nice work :~) especially for your first.

[Fifty-Six]

Looks great for your first try, but as others have said, you can still see spots on the pants from the mud splotches in the original alt.

[Xedia]

Looks good except the trousers :)

[Kasabian]

As most have pointed out, you've shaded over where the mud was, so there's some random splodges. There's a few pixels that don't need to be there(black pixel on the behind leg where the mud was, extra pixels on the sole of the shoe and a few others I would tidy up). The white of the jacket(behind her arm) should be a grey colour, rather than white.

Apart from that, it's nicely re-coloured!

[Jazz]

thanks guys, imma have a crack at improving it from what you've said in a bit! :-)

[auffant1]

They both look great aside a few lines looking crooked. My personal favorite is the second one.

[LiquidLuck.]

Awesome job! They look great :D