Ajujejus Goes Hunting

[::AustinChen::]

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/201/7/a/ajujejus_goes_hunting_by_austincmn-d57xeqm.png


Been doing graphics for quite a while but this is my first real pixel art and first Habbo alt.
This is about the village Ajujeja mentioned in some posts earlier from FartyPants. We are in the same Habbo group Bunny Empire. Ajujeja is meant to be a village in Bunny Empire lol. So Ajujejus is the king of Ajujeja, and he is hunting turtles along with the bunny army!

Please rate /10 and criticisms are welcome.

[Succubus]

The arms look really flat, so maybe adding shading would really help. Not to keen on the spear either, I just dont think it looks right and maybe should be going in the turtle, other then it looking like its floating around.

Other wise it's good!
7.5/10 :)

[Empired]

The rabbit that he's sitting on needs some work IMO and, as said above, so does the spear.

7/10 though from me, I couldn't do this :)