My original song (demo)

[:Markster:]

Hey,

So i was messing about on the piano at my uncle's yesterday just jamming and came up with this little piece. So i came home and recorded what it would basically sound like once it was done, with the addition of extra instruments and me actually singing it properly (as it was a little off at some points). So here is a demo of my song called "The Song (Pam Da Dum)"

https://soundcloud.com/markokaar/pam-da-dum

Check it out, and if you like it leave a comment, and if not then i'm always accepting constructive criticism :)
Cheers,
Mark

[GoldenMerc]

Amazing as per usual Mark

[Succubus]

This is great, you have a amazing voice and the beat to the song is fab.

[Jas,]

Everytime I hear you on skype Not gonna lie it's amazing your voice and all you can just hear it it's hard to explain what I'm trying to say but this is amazing :P

[Sho]

This is amazing Mark, I really love your voice xo

[LiquidLuck.]

Do I even need to comment? :( (finger) Amazing obviously. Gotta agree with Jas. xD

[IceNineKills]

Reminds me of this song:

http://youtu.be/ZwCCvAdXY6g

Good effort though.

[Zelda]

Pretty amazing really. Not my sort of music male vocals really but definitely liked it which is unusual for me so well done :)

[Teabags]

well done :)
really quite like it!

[Aiden]

N'awhh its very nice, cute and calming :). Not the kind of music I listen to but still very good.