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veeim
05-03-2013, 08:33 AM
Took me quite some time to build this room and thought I'd post some screenshots here to hear people's critiques/thoughts so I can improve the room.

I wanted this room to serve as both a well built room but also as an entrance to Library Run. This entrance is fully wired/function including fastpass (which is hidden behind one of the arches because it looks out of place when seen).

There are three things I currently iffy with
1. The counter looking somewhat out of place, I have a smaller counter but not sure where I'd put that either.
2. Not sure if I should keep in the gothic chandeliers in the room (shown in the second screenshot)
3. People might not like not knowing where they are in line (see second screenshot)

So yeah, let me know what you think!

http://vl.ee/imgdump/HLR_largeentranceclosed.png

http://vl.ee/imgdump/HLR_largeentranceopen.png

http://vl.ee/imgdump/HLR_smallentrance.png

chemidann95
05-03-2013, 05:39 PM
Great room!! Best of luck!

Mr-Trainor
05-03-2013, 08:17 PM
The room looks great! And I don't think the timer looks bad, I think it's fine there. But I agree with the fact that people won't know where they are in the line, it could become a bit confusing But yeah, other than that it looks really good :D.

Pigperson
06-03-2013, 08:50 PM
That room looks great and I think it looks better with the chandeliers. The doric classic pillars and white fences look a bit bright though for the room.

Will

Jeremy7814
06-03-2013, 09:48 PM
Woah Nice job!

zombies
06-03-2013, 09:49 PM
nice room, is there supposed to be the gap with the rope gates?

veeim
07-03-2013, 10:22 AM
Thanks for all the comments! :)


The room looks great! And I don't think the timer looks bad, I think it's fine there. But I agree with the fact that people won't know where they are in the line, it could become a bit confusing But yeah, other than that it looks really good :D.
Thanks! Yeah I'm going to shift all the rollers a square so at least you can see Habbos' heads.


That room looks great and I think it looks better with the chandeliers. The doric classic pillars and white fences look a bit bright though for the room.

Will
Will keep the chandeliers in! It does look a little too bright as well, but I think it adds interest to the room, I took inspiration from the Habbo Library public room:

http://vl.ee/imgdump/HLR_referencereallibrary.png


nice room, is there supposed to be the gap with the rope gates?
Yeah :)

The aim is to look like an open library, but still function as an entrance room. When people enter the room they get teleported to the bar stools, you'll get teleported to the roller line when you walk on the red carpet, and you can't move off the red rollers (even though it looks like you can).

geo
07-03-2013, 06:26 PM
Oh god. That's awesome! Finally someone doing something a little different from just an outdoor themed run! I wanna try creating a movie inspired run, so each room has a different movie but I think it'd be hard / pricey. Anyway, best of luck with your run!

veeim
07-03-2013, 06:45 PM
Oh god. That's awesome! Finally someone doing something a little different from just an outdoor themed run! I wanna try creating a movie inspired run, so each room has a different movie but I think it'd be hard / pricey. Anyway, best of luck with your run!
Haha thanks, yeah as you probably guessed each room is based on a book, The Hunger Games, Great Expectations, The Hobbit, Harry Potter etc. So in a sense it could be seen as movie inspired as many of them have been adapted to film :)

geo
07-03-2013, 07:17 PM
Haha thanks, yeah as you probably guessed each room is based on a book, The Hunger Games, Great Expectations, The Hobbit, Harry Potter etc. So in a sense it could be seen as movie inspired as many of them have been adapted to film :)

Ooh, I actually just thought you'd have had library based rooms LOL. Nice idea though :)

Bradley.
08-03-2013, 01:22 AM
lovely room x your site looks classy too

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