Your words - Ends 18th August

[Yupt]

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I wonder how many of you will recognise this competition - I've used it before and the reaction was that people had great fun writing their stories! (and I'll admit, reading them was very enjoyable too!) This competition is very simple and all you need to do is write a short story in accordance with the rules listed below:


You must include all members of the current Competitions Department staff as characters:
.Cymru.
Intersocial
Jurv
lawrawrrr
orientalframe?
Samanfa
Sloths-
Yupt

You must also incorporate the following:
Two of the characters must form a relationship
Two of the characters must have an argument
Something to do with Disney
Miniature/Crazy Golf


The story which I find the most interesting will win!

Post your answers below.

Prize: 1 Month VIP + 10 rep

[Daltron]

Disney on Hypnosis: A Short Story by Daltron

"I can't believe you get to play the role of Mickey for Disney on Ice" commented Cymru to Intersocial who was wearing a shockingly tight outfit.

"Me either, I can't even ice skate LOL!" replied Intersocial. Cymru and Intersocial giggled to each other as they parted ways so Cymru could watch the epic show from the seated area whilst Intersocial went backstage.

As the show begun all the lesser known Disney characters skated their way around the ice before Mickey made an appearance.

"Oh dear, I can't believe I got this gig" Intersocial thought. As he stepped out onto the ice he was preparing for the worst, but what he did not expect was Jurv to appear in a Minnie Mouse outfit to skate with him. They grabbed each others hands and begun to circle the ice.

What was unknown to everyone was that the evil lawrawrr and orientialframe had worked together to hypnotise Jurv into doing some evil things to sabotage the show! Intersocial, the shocking ice skater and athlete in general that he is quickly realised he was being pulled hard by Jurv. Jurv and Intersocial start arguing about which direction they are meant to skate in, before Intersocial is silenced and pulled.

"OH NO, I WON'T SURVIVE THIS, WHY IS HE PULLING ME SO HARD!"

Jurv, under hypnoses of lawrawrr and orientalframe pulled Intersocial towards the middle of the ice. As they got there, the ice began to crack and Intersocial fell hard on his stomach. As he peered down under the ice he noticed something. It was Samanfa.. in a wetsuit with oxygen cracking the ice from beneath! It appeared that everyone had conspired to ruining the show and Samanfa knew Intersocial couldn't swim or skate, and this could be deadly.

Cymru, the intuitive person she is saw Intersocial more uncomfortable than usual and quickly made her way backstage and located Sloths and Yupt. Sloths and Yupt had never got a long too well, but formed an unbreakable relationship to stop the evil things that were about to happen! The three of them noticed that Jurv was under hypnoses and that Intersocial was about to drown in cold ice.

The three of them put on their ice skates and some old disney outfits, grabbed some golf clubs from the crazy golf set that was conveniently located backstage and made their way onto the ice, ready to take down anything in their way to save Intersocial using their bare hands and the golf clubs.

I can't tell you what eventually happens as it is too violent for this forum, but Intersocial was saved, yay!

[Plumest]

"Nobody likes to wear black in the summer, Laura, it's a fact," Yupt, also known as Mike, who was on the BLUE team of Habbox Summer Spectacular, explained to lawrawrr, aka Laura, aka Black Team in Habbo Summer Spectacular. "I do, though!" The teenager replied with a pout. She crossed her arms over her chest as she stared at the boy. "Your opinions don't count!" He shot back with speed. "Whatever, I don't care!" Laura seemed to be OBVIOUSLY angered. "I'm going to go see Samanfa.."

Soon, lawrawrr had left the scene and we open up a new scene, at the Veterans Memorial Park. Lawrawrr and Samanfa were sitting on the swing set of the playground of the Park. They were swinging back and forth lightly in unison, talking about, well, everything. Laura didn't want to bring up her little argument with Mike, do they talked about other things. "Have you noticed how horrid Disney's shows and movie output has been getting? I miss the old Disney, with good shows.." Samanfa trailed off. They swung back and forth in silence for a few minutes before Laura leaped up off of the swing seat.

"Let's get all of our friends together and go Mini Golfing!" She shrieked excitedly. "I haven't been miniature golfing in ages!" Samanfa responded. She had gotten off of the swing too. "Okay, I'll call Sloths-, Oriantalframe?, and Jurv, you call Mike, Intersocial, and .Cymru.!" Laura commanded. "Okay!"

Conversation Between .Cymru. and Samanfa:
.Cymru.: Hey guuuurl!
Samanfa: Hey! So, lets cut to the chase. Laura and I want to go Mini Golfing and invite everyone. You wanna come? We won't earn any points for the teams, but..it's a fun thing! So, come with?
.Cymru.: I need to check my schedule..Let's see..

Their conversation paused for a moment and the ruffling of a ntebook's pages being turned could be heard.

.Camry.: I'm free! Only this afternoon, though, so is that when we're going?
Samanfa: Probably. Meet me at my house, kay?
.Camry.: Kay, see you soon.

--CALL ENDED--

Conversation between Lawrawrr and Sloths-:

Lawrawrr: This you?
Sloths-: Who else would it be? Intersocial? I know he and I like to get it on sometimes, but..nah, it's me..
Lawrawrr: *Giggling can be heard through the phone* Okay, okay. Soo, Samanfa, .Camry. and I are going mini golfing later today. You up for it?
Sloths-: *In an obviously excited voice* oh my gosh, yes! I love to mini golf!
Lawrawrr: Great! Meet me at Samanfa's house, we're all going in my car.
Sloths-: 'Aight, see you soon.

--CALL ENDED--

Conversation between Samanfa and "Mike" {AKA Yupt}

Yupt: I don't remember the last time I got a call from YOU.
Samanfa: Yeah, yeah, whatEVER. So, your little girlfriend Laura, .Camry., Sloths-, and I are going mini golfing soon. Come with?

There would be a few moments of hesitation before the voice spoke again.

Yupt: Fine, I'll be at..your house? Soon..
Samanfa: See you sooooon!

--CALL ENDED--

Conversation between Lawrawrr and Orientalframe?:

Orientalframe?: Wow, it's really you? You haven spoken to me in forever, love! How's life been?!
Lawrawrr: Oh, I've been great. I have this friend now named Plumest, her real name's Cynthia. She's cool.
Orientalframe?: I think I've seen her before.
Lawrawrr: Yeah, she's cool. Anyways, I was calling to ask if you wanted to go miniature golfing with me and a few others?
Orientalframe: Today? Sure, I'm bored out of my ******* MIND. I'll meet you at-
Lawrawrr: Samanfa's, we're all there.

--CALL ENDED--

By now, everyone that had been called had showed up. Lawrawrr and Samanfa called the rest of their friends to come and now everyone was crowded into Samanfa's, may I say, tiny, living room.

"Did everyone bring money? I'm not paying for all of your asses.." Lawrawrr spoke out.

"Money? I did, I have tons of it. Mostly for snacks, though, I love to eat." Orientalframe? responded.

"Well, think you can pay for a few of the stupid people who DIDN'T bring money? I'll pay for the rest.."

" 'Course. Two people without money, get over here!" In a moment, Yupt and Sloths- were standing in front of Orientalframe?.

"Everyone else that didn't bring money, come here." Lawrawrr was surrounded by everyone else. "Okay.. Let's.. go out to the car."


TIMESKIP TO AT THE GOLF PLACE 1ST HOLE

"I don't know how to do this!" Laura exclaimed in attempt to hold the golf club correctly. She seemed to be so concentrated on getting the correct swing of things that she didn't notice everyone had moved on.

That's when she felt a pair of arms wrap around her, holding on to hers and helping her to hold the golf club correctly.

"It's like this, you're..right handed, right? That's why it was so uncomfortable with your left hand on top.." She looked upwards and back to the person that was speaking to her.

Much to her surprise, it was Samanfa helping her with this. Laura blinked a few times, shaking the strange feeling inside of her off. "Alright.." SHe muttered. Her cheeks were slowly turning a lgiht shade of red as she attempted to hit the golf ball with the club correctly. She still failed.

That's when she felt the pair of arms around her again. To be honest, it didn't feel as bad as she thought. She'd always expected that a guy would do this, but she sort of liked it with Samanfa's arms around her.. They were in the middle of the first hole{Still!} as Samanfa gently guided Laura's arms to hit the gold ball correctly. It went into the hole when the ball was hit.

Laura moved away from Samanfa, jumping up and down and shouting that she. "Got it in the hole! I got it in the hole!" She jumped around the cuorse's hole and smiled widely.

Samantha moved over t her and gave her one of the tightest hugs she'd ever received. "You did it!" There was a large smile on her face as she said this.

Suddenly, randomly, their lips had been connected due to Laura. She didn't know why, ti just.. it just felt like the thing to do.

~~~~~The details that happen in their makeout session is NOT suitable for anyone under...any age... so I will not post it.~~~~~

Samantha's hair had been pulled out of the tight bradi it was in and Laura's hair was even messier than usual.

"Finally, the sexual tension between you two when you're together was OVERBEARING." Came a voice, obviously of Yupt, as the two pulled away from their kiss. Laura's chest heaved slightly from the intensity of the passionate making-out and she sent a glare to Mike. "Shut up, Mike."

"We're all don with the game, are you two going to play or what?" Mike leaned against one of the wooden poles in the miniature golf area.

"Yeah, yeah, we'll play, come on, Samantha."

To sum it all up, Laura and Samantha teamed up and won the game.


Argument: Lawrawrr and Yupt

Relationship: I think it's obvious.

[wixard]

Today was the day.

After years of saving up, the Competitions Department had finally scraped enough money together to take a trip to Disneyland, Florida. Lawrawrrr had suggested it as a sort of team bonding exercise, which everyone in turn was quick to agree to.

As the date of the flight crept closer, feelings of nervousness and anxiety began to hit each member of the department, as some of them had never even met face to face before, never mind having to live together in the crammed confinements of a cheap motel for the week.

“Yupt is that you?” Intersocial rolled his suitcase over to an extremely worried looking habbo.

“WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN? WE’RE GOING TO BE LATE.” Yupt moaned, whilst beckoning Intersocial to follow him to the rest of the group, not far from where he was initially standing. By now the gang had already introduced themselves and had a chat, so it was time to make their way to their terminal.

As they were joking around, waiting for the gate to open, a man who appeared to work for the airline approached Samanfa. The others looked on with great interest, as Samanfa’s facial expressions began to change after each word he spoke.

“What do you think he’s saying to her?” Cymru asked, looking puzzled.

“I’m not too sure, but judging from her reaction it must be good… I think.” Sloths- replied, raising an eyebrow at Samanfa who was now, jumping up and down with what appeared to be excitement.

“GUYS OVER HERE, COME WITH ME!” Samanfa shouted over to them.

“YOU’LL NEVER GUESS WHAT…”


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“I can’t believe Jin paid to bump us up to first class!” Orientalframe exclaimed, whilst graciously accepting a glass of orange mimosa from one of the passing cabin crew.

“I know! I’ve never been on an airplane with Mini-Golf. Come play with me Cymru.” Sloths said, walking over to the section on the plane where someone had set up the most bizarre looking Mini-Golf course any of them had ever seen.

“Let me sit beside Yupt.” Jurv said, pushing past Lawrawrrr and climbing into the seat next to him.

Jurv quickly glanced at Yupt and smiled, Yupt grinned back before playfully shoving Jurv in the arm. Lawrawrrr noticed this and scowled, this wasn’t how her plan was meant to pan out. She wasn’t happy, she wasn’t happy at all.



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It was quite a long flight, and with many hours yet to go most of the gang decided to sleep to kill time and prevent the undesirable jetlag. The only three left awake, happened to be Lawrawrr, Yupt, and Jurv.

Yupt was facing the window, his earphones in and his thoughts elsewhere when he felt a hand on his leg. He slowly looked down at the hand, and then over his shoulder at Jurv.

“What are you doing?” He whispered furiously.

“I know this is what you want.” Jurv replied softly.

Though apprehensive at first, Yupt delicately placed his hand on Jurvs, slowly interlocking their fingers. After a few minutes, Jurvs hand broke free.

“I need the bathroom.” Jurv began to shift from his seat, and as he got up he turned, seductively motioning for Yupt to follow. That was the night Jurv and Yupt became honorary members of the Mile High Club.

As they scurried back to their seats, Lawrawrr was now sitting in their row, her arms crossed, a look of pure hatred and anger on her face.

“What. The. Hell. Do you think you’re doing, with my man?” She howled at Jurv, waking the others up.

“HE LOVES ME, NOT YOU.” Jurv replied angrily, his hand raised to his heart passionately.

“Liar, you brainwashed him you LIAR.” She screamed, kicking the seat in front of her, sending Intersocial flying.

“Calm down Lawrawrr, seriously calm down.” Yupt replied, bending down to help Intersocial back up.

“I’ve had enough.” Lawrawrrr breathed, as a rush of tears began to steadily flow down her cheeks.

It was that specific moment which broke her, which made her snap. She ran to the cockpit, and with an unbelievable burst of strength overpowered the pilot and all of the other crew, it was then that she sent the plane crashing to the sea.

Everyone screamed hysterically as the plane hurled closer and closer to the ground, their bodies now limp like ragdolls, being lurched in a different direction each second. Lawrawrrr stumbled back into the first class cabin, her face expressionless as she screeched.

“IF I CAN’T HAVE HIM, NOBODY CAN.”



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YES YURV :Heart:

also sorry laura don't take offence
IT JUST FELT LIKE IT WAS MORE SUITED TO PICK YOU

[Drake.]

Once upon a time, Jurv and Intersocial were walking down a road together. "Yo Intersocial!" shouted Jurv. "Why the hell are you shouting?! I'm right next to you!" exclaimed Intersocial. "Yo, Intersocial, ifyou'remyboyfriendsaywhat" Jurv said confidently. "...what?" Intersocial replied. "You're my boyfriend now!" screamed Jurv, his hands unbuttoning Intersocial's shirt. Intersocial smashed his fist into Jurv's face, sending him flying into the wall of a building. The whole wall collapsed on Jurv, revealing the shocked faces of Sloths-, .Cymru., Yupt, Samanfa, orientalframe? and lawrawrrr who were hiding, unclothed, beneath the IKEA blankets of a king-sized bed, wearing nothing but a set of Mickey Mouse ears each. "IT'S NOT WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE!" .Cymru. screamed, "WE... WERE, UHM... WE WERE PLAYING, UHM, CRAZY GOLF!" Intersocial stared furiously at her, "WHY THE HELL ARE YOUR FRIENDS WEARING MY PRIZED MICKEY MOUSE EARS COLLECTIOOOOOOOOOOON?!?!?!?!" At that moment, a fist punched upwards through the pile of bricks, holding a small device with a single red button in the middle of it. Jurv's thumb shot down onto the button. The next few seconds passed in slow-motion. As the button was pushed further down, the whole building erupted into a roar of explosions and a bright, blazing light engulfed everybody, scorching everything in its reach. Time started speeding up, the huge firey ball expanded faster and faster, and grew closer and closer until waesrdtfyvguyitudrcvghbjnmkl,;.'/#

[Ekelektra]

Sloths- sat in her room sketching amazing pictures of Disney characters, her favourite past time. She almost had Merida's hair perfect, and after 13 hours of working on it was about to finish by drawing the last line, when her Skype beeped, informing her she had a new message.

"CRAP" she screamed as the sudden interruption made her jump and draw all across the page. Her anger quickly faded when she realised it was .Cymru., her boss.

.Cymru.: You are cordially invited to the HxComps bonding sesh! Meet at the mini golf park down the road in 5 minutes.

Sloths- was a little confused that the bonding session had such short notice, but she knew her boss was famous for planning things right at the last minute, and stranger things had happened at her workplace, HxComps Inc.

10 minutes later all of the HxComps employees were standing at the start of the local mini golf course. Lawrawrrr was the first to play, and after one hit already had a hole in one.

At the second hole, orientalframe? also got a hole in one. After 10 holes, every single employee had got a hole in one, except Sloths- and Yupt.

"Good luck Sloths-!" Jurv said, making Sloths- blush so that she was as red as Merida's hair. Her last hit had made the ball stop just 5 centimetres from the hole. It was virtually impossible to miss.
"Oh thanks!" She giggled, and as she was so nervous knowing her crush since starting at HxComps, Jurv, was watching, Sloths- hit the ball too hard and it flew right out of the course.
"OMG OOPS" She squealed, as most of her workmates laughed. Jurv winked at her as he ran off after the ball. Sloths- turned even redder, as if that was already possible, and wished she had never decided to come to this stupid bonding session.

At hole 11, Sloths- finally got that hole in one she had been wanting, which meant Yupt was the only one who hadn't.

"You have GOT to be KIDDING ME" Yupt screamed. "You're all cheating! All of you I know it you're all cheaters... CHEEEAAAATERSSSSS!!!!"
"We're not cheating" explained Samanfa, "you're just terrible at mini golf..."
Yupt screamed again, embarassing all of the HxComps staff even more since everyone around them was staring, and ran off. In the distance all of the staff could just hear Yupt calling out before exiting the venue "oh yeah... I QUIT BY THE WAY."

"Wow Samanfa! Look what you've done now! You've just made us lose our best marketing person. You're are just the worst!" Intersocial exclaimed.
"OH YEAH? I KNOW YOU WERE THE ONE WHO STOLE MY LUNCH OUT OF THE FRIDGE LAST WEEK." Samanfa yelled back.
"HOW DARE YOU ACCUSE ME? I KNOW FOR A FACT THAT WAS LAWRAWRR NOT ME HOW DARE-"
"ME? HOW DARE YOU ACCUSE ME! I SAW YOU LAST MONTH IN THE-"

"Do you wanna get out of here?" Jurv whispered to Sloths- as they stood watching all of the staff lose it. .Cymru. has started crying because her awesome bonding session was ruined."
"Yeah ok!" Sloths- giggled as she and Jurv walked away into the sunset.