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MasterNicoAngel
07-09-2013, 01:20 AM
Hey guys. So I got myself working on an alteration once again. Still noobish :P I might be expecting some comments like "doesn't look good enough" or "Its too messy." Its alright :P I can improve myself. For the meantime, post what you think below :)

http://i39.tinypic.com/2rhvbj7.png

oli
08-09-2013, 01:50 AM
both feet look silly
the right foot likes like a ducks foot also the right leg looks flat
whilst the left one along with leg are just out of place

I do like teh knives though n all the scratches n stuff on the body

MasterNicoAngel
08-09-2013, 05:39 AM
both feet look silly
the right foot likes like a ducks foot also the right leg looks flat
whilst the left one along with leg are just out of place

I do like teh knives though n all the scratches n stuff on the body

Feet right. Thanks for the feedback! :)

Shockwave.2CC
10-09-2013, 10:52 AM
It's OK, but the feet just look wrong

Liva
11-09-2013, 09:19 AM
I semi like the feet, but agree with the above comments. But I really dislike the claw things. It looks a bit like a mess because they're all so close together. Maybe try outlining the ones in the middle with grey, and outline the actual outline in black?
Like:
http://i1301.photobucket.com/albums/ag109/yvviL/example_zpsaedb5a1d.png

MasterNicoAngel
11-09-2013, 09:23 AM
I semi like the feet, but agree with the above comments. But I really dislike the claw things. It looks a bit like a mess because they're all so close together. Maybe try outlining the ones in the middle with grey, and outline the actual outline in black?
Like:
http://i1301.photobucket.com/albums/ag109/yvviL/example_zpsaedb5a1d.png

Looks OK. But maybe just a little darker than the gray you used :P thanks for the feedback guys! :)

Daltron
13-09-2013, 11:39 PM
omg looks epic!

Moha
14-09-2013, 04:57 PM
pretty nice mate as a first version, but how about you add a lil beard? would look awesome ;)

Explorator
15-09-2013, 12:21 PM
I like it. I think the claws look a little odd though.

But I suppose that'd be hard to do with such little space.

Icey
22-09-2013, 02:09 PM
I like it actually :) Especially as a first one bud! Keep it up!

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