Wonkas Chocolate Factory WIP

[Bef]

Hey hey, I need your help guys. Ive been working on this for a few days. Its hard work -wipes brow- As u can see all i have done so far is the choco pool and waterfall (No other candyman mixers his chocolate like that u no ;)) Im gunna add a little bridge and a pretty path and some candy toadstools ect but i was wondering if u had any other ideas? :D
http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/1175/chocolatefactory9fx.th.png (http://img56.imageshack.us/my.php?image=chocolatefactory9fx.png)
I was also wondering if u thought it would be a good idea to add like things from other rooms e.g The everlasting gobstober machine, the big tv, the squirrils. What do u reckon?

[ItsDave]

*gurgles* if only that pool was real!!!!! :'( Thats a very good alt, do the tube that boy goes up :D so far 8/10 +rep

[Bef]

I tried doing that but it didnt look right. il try again. Glad u like it so far <3

[ASHFELT]

maybe you should add choco apple trees

[.Lynn]

I really like the stone effect
Add some bubbles in the chocolate to make it look like its uh getting cooked or something

//Lynn

[Adam$]

That is excellent. Could do with a bit of stuff on the left, but apart from that, it's ace. Also, what does WIP stand for?

8/10

[Roboevil]

It's a very nice idea and you've made no mistakes so far, except for the rock wall at the back, it looks all skew-whiff. The chocolate pool could look alot thicker too, luvin' it though, definately make some more :), with Willy wonka and the Umpa lumpas!

[Steven]

That is excellent. Could do with a bit of stuff on the left, but apart from that, it's ace. Also, what does WIP stand for?

8/10


work in progress

[Steve20]

Hey hey, I need your help guys. Ive been working on this for a few days. Its hard work -wipes brow- As u can see all i have done so far is the choco pool and waterfall (No other candyman mixers his chocolate like that u no ;)) Im gunna add a little bridge and a pretty path and some candy toadstools ect but i was wondering if u had any other ideas? :D
http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/1175/chocolatefactory9fx.th.png (http://img56.imageshack.us/my.php?image=chocolatefactory9fx.png)
I was also wondering if u thought it would be a good idea to add like things from other rooms e.g The everlasting gobstober machine, the big tv, the squirrils. What do u reckon?

U may use my Willy Wonka :P
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4265/avatarwillywonka5na.png (http://imageshack.us)
Here ;)

U used Waterfall of Wobble squable,
Stone's from Library >=P

[mcmurtrie]

ROFL That's brill :P

[Mural]

I really like it its top-notch the pool is better than the stream idea before...
The chocolate looks abit weak, its like murky water.. you should try and thicken it up 9/10 + rep so far !

[Owen]

Good base :P
10/10

[Disaronno]

Lol good but if you look in the pool some chocolate is green :p

[Sank]

Thats alright.

8/10.

[Nothing can be perfect].

[Bef]

Thanks guys. aint got much further. In middle of doing the bridge! aaah Im using the bridge in the gardens but im doing it from scratch like cos i need to make it slightly bigger some im trying to copy the pixels and my little brain is getting confused!
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/3728/chocolatefactory0um.th.png (http://img379.imageshack.us/my.php?image=chocolatefactory0um.png)
Ooo and i put choco blocks in the pool ;)

[properclone]

i spy pixel errors.. also chocolate isnt see through?

[Bef]

This chocolate is :D lol il sort the pixel errors out when its finished ;]

[Yayse]

I love it bef but the choc water should definitely be more translucent "/, thicker than it is. I can't even see it =[

everything else is amazing tho <3 as always

[Mr.Sam]

The base looks good-

for mr wonka you coud use or edit this

http://www.habboxhosting.com/resources/public_html/thumbnails/habbo-posh-small-A.gif

and the tube in the lobby as a refrence for the tube the boy gets stuck in :P

[zak-x]

Looks ok 8/10

[Steve20]

The base looks good-

for mr wonka you coud use or edit this

http://www.habboxhosting.com/resources/public_html/thumbnails/habbo-posh-small-A.gif

and the tube in the lobby as a refrence for the tube the boy gets stuck in :P

Not that 1, My 1 :P

[Mr.Sam]

Not that 1, My 1 :P

it looks like the ' charcter ' you youst to be able to be at habbo cinema

and yours isn't public room size :)

http://www.habboxhosting.com/resources/public_html/thumbnails/habbo-posh-big-B.gif

[Steve20]

it looks like the ' charcter ' you youst to be able to be at habbo cinema

and yours isn't public room size :)

http://www.habboxhosting.com/resources/public_html/thumbnails/habbo-posh-big-B.gif

U think?
http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/7369/avatarwillywonka2vv.png (http://imageshack.us)
:P

[.Lynn]

Thanks guys. aint got much further. In middle of doing the bridge! aaah Im using the bridge in the gardens but im doing it from scratch like cos i need to make it slightly bigger some im trying to copy the pixels and my little brain is getting confused!
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/3728/chocolatefactory0um.th.png (http://img379.imageshack.us/my.php?image=chocolatefactory0um.png)
Ooo and i put choco blocks in the pool ;)
Lol you know u can just paste it there..or do u know how to get it trans? Need help?

[Drewar]

Well, it's absoloutely fantabulous! I am loving the effect of the stones, I smell elites by the time your finished :)

[MakeBelieve..]

you took the stones from the library the waterfall from the rooftop rumble and the grass from picnic area i think -.-

[Bef]

Nope, grass is my own, part of the waterfall is from rooftop rumble but rock shading and shapes are mine and yes walls are from libary. and lynn i want to change the bridge quite a bit, i just needed the shape but thanku anyway <3 :P This how far i got now!
http://img349.imageshack.us/img349/6078/chocolatefactory0xt.png (http://imageshack.us)
And Steve, thanks for the woka but hes to big i need a public room sized one. Foxmouth i may well use yours <3 Il +Rep for both of u and lynn for offering help!

[Steph]

it's ok so far. did you steal the idea from Boject?

[joeyjo21]

Thats so cool im in love! Such an amazing idea ^_^ + rep

Edit: oops apparently i cant rep you right now as i need to "spread the rep" so feel free to remind me :-)

[.x.ellissa.x.]

Hey Thats Great So Far • Well Done

[-Soph-]

:O I LOVE IT

if only it was real :(

I could go SWIMMING YAYAYA

[Bef]

it's ok so far. did you steal the idea from Boject?

No i actually stole the idea off the film that was made by warner bros (I think) Which stole the idea off the old film which stole the idea off the book which was written by Roald Dahl. I knew somebody would think this but i was actually making this before Boject posted his, Ask Yayse :P

[Steph]

No i actually stole the idea off the film that was made by warner bros (I think) Which stole the idea off the old film which stole the idea off the book which was written by Roald Dahl. I knew somebody would think this but i was actually making this before Boject posted his, Ask Yayse :P
ok ok ok

[Wayne]

Pfft! -That's awesome! well done 10/10 :p

[Toes]

Oh. My. God.! That is AMAZING!!! Rep+!!!!!

[H.bubbly]

umm i dunno what to say , its good

[Bef]

Im still making it but i had to put on hold for a while as i was in hospital. Il start again soon and il have alot more time on my hands now so i will finish it!!

[joeyjo21]

Im still making it but i had to put on hold for a while as i was in hospital. Il start again soon and il have alot more time on my hands now so i will finish it!!
I cant wait! I just hope i remember to check back later.