140 or less - Ends 4th May

[Yupt]

http://Habbox.com/text/volter_small/one+hundred%20and%20forty%20or%20less

You may recognise this one, I did it a few months ago and it proved popular so I thought I might try it out again! The aim of the competition is simple, I give you a famous story and you re-write it in under 140 characters (the length of a tweet!). So, here we go. For this competition re-tell the story of Peter Pan in 140 characters or less.

The one I consider to be the best will win.

Prize: 10 credits + 15 rep
Click here (http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=791966&p=8059610#post8059610) for more information about prizes

[James]

Once upon a time where was a boy named peter who dreamed of ebeing old. so he flew to foreverland and aged forever. the end


how many characters was that

[Camcorder]

A boy flies to a nursery; visits Never Land; evades Captain Hook and a bomb; rescues Tinker Bell; flies back to London--but never grows up.

[Brad]

Peter Pan, a boy from neverland, attacked by Captain Hook, saved tiger lily. Everything went smoothly.

Character count: 82

[KingEvan]

There was a ugly barnacle, he was so ugly, everyone died. The end

[Jbate94]

Problem was Peter Pan was born... THE END!

[Honor-Branch]

Once upon a time, there was a dude named Peter Pan. He died. The end.

[DJRianne]

Once upon a time, peter pan growed up, he's now called Justin Bieber - The end

[Drake.]

Once upon a time Wendy took crack.

[LiquidLuck.]

Peter Pan lives in Neverland, where he never grows up. Killed evil Captain Hook, saved sweet Tiger Lily. Chose eternal youth over adoption.

Characters: 139

[Cassiieee]

There was a young boy named PeterPan who fell inlove with Captain hook, Captain hook was jealous he was old and left Peter Pan and sailed into the sea of neverland, vanished.

Characters: 140

[Bankai90]

Peter engages Hook in combat as the children fight off the pirates, and finally succeeds in humiliating the captain. Peter save the day. FIN