Revenge on Him. [Poem]

[thechoo]

This poem i wrote for a Habbo thing I am doing, But i would like your thoughts on it before I inculde it.

Revenge on Him.
He lied to me.
For that he'll regret.
I'll kill him, I will!
I promise. I bet.
But with my head up high.
My fists in rage.
I'll smack him, HIT HIM.
I'll fight, I'll engage.
I stand up tall.
High with might.
For he's the one.
That'll get the fright.
Love is Sweet.
Wine and Dine.
But revenge I'll get.
Revenge is mine.

[Rebecca]

oh my.. much violence... other than that lovely +rep :D

[thechoo]

Thankyou. :]

[Achieve]

Great poem + Rep also

[Achieve]

Edit: Double posted :S

[thechoo]

Thankyou :)

[-=rooty987=-]

I like it :D
Loving the 'Wine and Dine.But revenge I'll get.Revenge is mine.'
XxxxX
Dan

[thechoo]

Thanks :)

[chipie60]

Wow i like that :)

[Rebecca]

ROFL!!!!!!!!!! <33 i cnt remeber if i repped you or not :s

[thechoo]

I don't either..
And thankyou chipie :)