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HabboDeux,
01-12-2014, 06:31 PM
NOIR © Dessert Lounge (https://www.habbo.com/room/68406005) by Deux,

Dedicated exclusively to stuffing your face with cake, cookies, chocolate, pastries & any kind of dessert you can imagine. Having a bad day? Fix it with sugar!

http://i.imgur.com/1DpvrAC.png

:odey:
01-12-2014, 10:34 PM
It looks more like a club than a place to stuff your face with cake! There isn't enough cake on show :P
It's cute though.

OldLoveSong
02-12-2014, 03:49 AM
U need more sweets along the sides of the room nd maybe make things brighter

Samantha
02-12-2014, 04:25 AM
It looks OK, but I think the name emphasises something it's lacking in - desserts. You only really have one place for them when you could extend it and as opposed to just desserts make it a snack bar perhaps with popcorn, candyfloss, fast food etc.

HabboDeux,
02-12-2014, 05:35 AM
Thanks for the feedback! Updating it now with the suggestions in mind (:

Kyle
02-12-2014, 07:05 AM
Is this not a carbon copy of rakker's club mammoth?


~~from phone

Empired
02-12-2014, 08:15 AM
Is this not a carbon copy of rakker's club mammoth?


~~from phone
Isn't this Club Mammoth?
https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-U4GClEiGWn8/Uu6LGFPF29I/AAAAAAAAAOo/obb-NxHRCVM/w935-h608/Club%2Bmammoth.png

Jazz
02-12-2014, 08:56 AM
For some reason, I dont think the cabin stone floors go with the theme of the room. Maybe something lighter?

Kyle
02-12-2014, 10:13 AM
Isn't this Club Mammoth?

perhaps not.

it appears to be an amalgamation of lots of rooms i've seen by rakker and others, the one that sprung to mind is the one with almost the same layout (admittedly different forms of floor leveling at some points) that had a huge yacht surrounded by jellyfish and was widely regarded as a pointlessly ugly room. idk hc lounge or something who knows

guess that kind of thing is unavoidable though considering the theme of the room and the limit to what can be done. just looking at this gives me a headache because it's so blurry. @oftenMiceElf (http://www.habboxforum.com/member.php?u=122828); @Macklebee (http://www.habboxforum.com/member.php?u=120717); just look at what the removal of small sprites has done to rooms that would once have been beautiful and easy on the eye.

it's a nice and well laid out room but the bar area leaves a lot to be desired, there's not much space for actual movement or socialisation away from the small seating and dancefloor areas and the fact that the lift teleport doesn't go straight up bugs me. but hey, i'm a pedant.

Bloop
03-12-2014, 12:15 PM
It looks awesome but I think it needs more ''''''dessert elements''''' lmao :P

Michael
03-12-2014, 04:45 PM
I don't really like those glass blocks in the shape of an ''N'' nor the shape of the whole room in general. I think you should base the room around a certain point and build around that - for example: a bar in the middle

e5
03-12-2014, 05:01 PM
Very swanky room - Needs more cake though! :P

MKR&*42
03-12-2014, 11:35 PM
Looks alright but the top bar lounge area is realllyyyy bare and could do with some spicing up. It's a decent room but nothing astonishing really, quite .. bland?.. overall x)

HabboDeux,
06-12-2014, 07:51 PM
Thanks everybody for the critiques! Here is the new, MORE COLORFUL updated version (:

MINT © dessert lounge (http://www.habbo.com/room/68406005) by Deux,

http://i.imgur.com/80eui5s.png

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