View Full Version : [Alteration] More of my work
HabCorey
17-07-2015, 08:18 AM
GENERAL
http://i.imgur.com/egwvQwJ.gif
http://i.imgur.com/qh6VlbS.png
http://i.imgur.com/o6Bi0v6.gif
http://i.imgur.com/AUJWfYx.png
http://i.imgur.com/8AvCu0D.png
http://i.imgur.com/JQlHvXM.png
http://i.imgur.com/ZYaMRHH.png
http://i.imgur.com/5t9527Y.png
http://i.imgur.com/XI47aJy.gif
Cool for the Summer - Demi Lovato
http://i.imgur.com/abRvEx3.png
ROGUE June Issue
http://i.imgur.com/L6hDCHr.png
Bad Blood - Corey Bright ft. Ryan Valentina
http://i.imgur.com/D7undqO.png
http://i.imgur.com/xmcyLHZ.png
http://i.imgur.com/HPnGE95.png
http://i.imgur.com/bY4pLPA.png
http://i.imgur.com/jbgwMUc.png
http://i.imgur.com/5UQK4Mm.png
http://i.imgur.com/RBENfR6.gif
Really good work - I really hate the whole habbo music scene but your work is actually very nice!
Bloop
17-07-2015, 02:51 PM
when i saw the first alt on your twitter i was REALLY impressed
theyre all soooooo good and yeah i hate the music industry too LMAO full of arrogant *******s and no lifers but some pretty good work here!
MKR&*42
17-07-2015, 05:50 PM
They all look pretty great. However with this:
http://i.imgur.com/AUJWfYx.png
You need more ''definition''/shading on the dress to show where the breast area is - as right now it just looks like the dress points out at the side randomly.
They all look pretty great. However with this:
http://i.imgur.com/AUJWfYx.png
You need more ''definition''/shading on the dress to show where the breast area is - as right now it just looks like the dress points out at the side randomly.
oh you nit picking little swine i'll hit you
I LOVE THEM ALL. :) great work I hope you make more to show us
MKR&*42
18-07-2015, 06:44 AM
oh you nit picking little swine i'll hit you
I LOVE THEM ALL. :) great work I hope you make more to show us
IT'S CALLED CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
dbgtz
18-07-2015, 11:46 AM
I'm going to be brutal here and just say your shading sucks, as I have said previously but you just seemed to have ignored. You should not be using brushes to shade when doing pixel art. In doing so, it begins to look blurry and lacks finer details. You seem to not use brushes/gradients on some pieces, but end up with what almost looks like pillow shading but ultimately, the light source is very inconsistent (I first noticed this in the 5th one down). The line art is, again, decent for the most part but there are some dodgy proportions (line the arms/hands in #7 or the legs in #8) and still some areas that need work (such as the elbow on Bre Chandler, though her proportions seem off too).
TL;DR: Work on your shading (and do so by hand if doing pixel art).
abitoflauren
14-08-2015, 01:56 PM
I don't really like the dress on the forth one its a bit to gradient
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