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HabCorey
17-07-2015, 08:18 AM
GENERAL

http://i.imgur.com/egwvQwJ.gif
http://i.imgur.com/qh6VlbS.png
http://i.imgur.com/o6Bi0v6.gif
http://i.imgur.com/AUJWfYx.png
http://i.imgur.com/8AvCu0D.png
http://i.imgur.com/JQlHvXM.png
http://i.imgur.com/ZYaMRHH.png
http://i.imgur.com/5t9527Y.png
http://i.imgur.com/XI47aJy.gif

Cool for the Summer - Demi Lovato

http://i.imgur.com/abRvEx3.png

ROGUE June Issue

http://i.imgur.com/L6hDCHr.png

Bad Blood - Corey Bright ft. Ryan Valentina

http://i.imgur.com/D7undqO.png

http://i.imgur.com/xmcyLHZ.png

http://i.imgur.com/HPnGE95.png

http://i.imgur.com/bY4pLPA.png

http://i.imgur.com/jbgwMUc.png

http://i.imgur.com/5UQK4Mm.png

http://i.imgur.com/RBENfR6.gif

Joe
17-07-2015, 08:27 AM
Really good work - I really hate the whole habbo music scene but your work is actually very nice!

Bloop
17-07-2015, 02:51 PM
when i saw the first alt on your twitter i was REALLY impressed

theyre all soooooo good and yeah i hate the music industry too LMAO full of arrogant *******s and no lifers but some pretty good work here!

MKR&*42
17-07-2015, 05:50 PM
They all look pretty great. However with this:

http://i.imgur.com/AUJWfYx.png

You need more ''definition''/shading on the dress to show where the breast area is - as right now it just looks like the dress points out at the side randomly.

thms
17-07-2015, 11:39 PM
They all look pretty great. However with this:

http://i.imgur.com/AUJWfYx.png

You need more ''definition''/shading on the dress to show where the breast area is - as right now it just looks like the dress points out at the side randomly.

oh you nit picking little swine i'll hit you

I LOVE THEM ALL. :) great work I hope you make more to show us

MKR&*42
18-07-2015, 06:44 AM
oh you nit picking little swine i'll hit you

I LOVE THEM ALL. :) great work I hope you make more to show us

IT'S CALLED CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM

dbgtz
18-07-2015, 11:46 AM
I'm going to be brutal here and just say your shading sucks, as I have said previously but you just seemed to have ignored. You should not be using brushes to shade when doing pixel art. In doing so, it begins to look blurry and lacks finer details. You seem to not use brushes/gradients on some pieces, but end up with what almost looks like pillow shading but ultimately, the light source is very inconsistent (I first noticed this in the 5th one down). The line art is, again, decent for the most part but there are some dodgy proportions (line the arms/hands in #7 or the legs in #8) and still some areas that need work (such as the elbow on Bre Chandler, though her proportions seem off too).

TL;DR: Work on your shading (and do so by hand if doing pixel art).

abitoflauren
14-08-2015, 01:56 PM
I don't really like the dress on the forth one its a bit to gradient

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