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Aoi
15-10-2015, 10:45 AM
A little room I made a while ago when the Paris furniture was released. Not sure how I'm going to make the interior yet. Constructive criticism is welcome!

http://i.imgur.com/O866v5P.png
:odey:
15-10-2015, 11:10 AM
I think it's fantastic, looks like it could be a public room easily. :)
Nice work.
Cerys
15-10-2015, 11:25 AM
Very nice! :D

I'm not too sure if that lil blue patch looks out of place or not (is it water? my screens being rude i cant tell xD)

apart from that though i really like it :3
Joe
15-10-2015, 12:38 PM
Literally anything that looks vaguely like a room looks good to me as I'm rubbish at anything else, idk why but the room shader draws me in so much. I like that colour!
rnix
15-10-2015, 12:41 PM
The extra tiles on the left/missing tiles on the lower left look strange to me.
and the water looks a little strange. But other than that it looks good :D
Expling
15-10-2015, 02:44 PM
Looks pretty cute
it's nice to see someone doing something useful with that paris furni!
OldLoveSong
15-10-2015, 11:28 PM
totally fab work xx
ToxicMint
16-10-2015, 06:30 AM
I hate this I think u scrap it and start over. Oh wait.... I already did that u *REMOVED*

Edited by Expling (Forum Moderator): Please respect other forum members
Scotesh
16-10-2015, 10:35 AM
Add a little detailing to the section of water and maybe around that path as well. The gap next to it looks a little odd.

Otherwise really nice!
Aoi
18-10-2015, 06:03 PM
Thank you for the feedback guys! And I agree the water does look a little out of place. I put it there because I felt there were just too many brown/marble tiles. What kind of detailing should I add to the water, or should I take it away all together and add something else?
A
18-10-2015, 06:14 PM
looks fantastic, must of took you ages! well done!
Matt
19-10-2015, 10:08 AM
Great room Aoi. I love the hedges and tables at the top, very cute.

You could just replace the water with tiles?
Invista
25-10-2015, 11:18 PM
Great work! I can't wait to see the interior... I like to get inside, sometimes, if you know what i mean ;)
thms
26-10-2015, 03:27 AM
Great work! I can't wait to see the interior... I like to get inside, sometimes, if you know what i mean ;)

disgusting

amazing work mercy who designed it for you

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