Couple of doo dahs

[dbgtz]

Was making (most) of these for something bigger, but I don't think I'll finish it in a while due to exams and whatnot so figured I'd posts these as they're essentially standalone. Second one isn't exactly done either but w/e

http://i.imgur.com/rlCP567.png

[thms]

poor little bag head

nice work dogbeats

[Kyle]

Was making (most) of these for something bigger, but I don't think I'll finish it in a while due to exams and whatnot so figured I'd posts these as they're essentially standalone. Second one isn't exactly done either but w/e

http://i.imgur.com/rlCP567.png
The form of the body is good enough on the first ones but feels like they're very rough sketches arm because of how jagged and thin the arms get towards the hands. Colours on the thing on the mans head in 1st picture don't look to have much contrast which always needs to be more prominent in darker things to define creases etc easier. You have a habit of reducing your surface area and having to compromise on colours and definition in your habbo alts, your left (>) foot looks smaller than the right and right (<) arm is disproportionately short looking because of the angle you've tried to draw it at. Would like to see some bulkier people so you can make better use of space for shading and colours ����

[dbgtz]

The form of the body is good enough on the first ones but feels like they're very rough sketches arm because of how jagged and thin the arms get towards the hands. Colours on the thing on the mans head in 1st picture don't look to have much contrast which always needs to be more prominent in darker things to define creases etc easier. You have a habit of reducing your surface area and having to compromise on colours and definition in your habbo alts, your left (>) foot looks smaller than the right and right (<) arm is disproportionately short looking because of the angle you've tried to draw it at. Would like to see some bulkier people so you can make better use of space for shading and colours ����

I actually noticed when doing the end one I seem to make it oddly small which doesn't seem to go well with Habbos (which is a reason why I posted this). I'll look into this and the colours which I know I have issues with and repost later or tomorrow. What are those question marks? I can't even see :(
I would rep but I need to spread apparently.

[A]

Middle one is the best for me, it looks really good, well done some nice work here!!!

[scottmenace]

youre so good with this . i love to learn from you