Habshine Forum is now open!

[Punkdude]

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Hello! Habshine is a new fansite that is opening very soon. With many unique things to offer,
Habshine just launched its forum and would gladly have you to come over and register!
Just to look around and make friends with everyone on there!
Take part in discussions, chats, votes and make it your own! We would love to have you.
The Maint is up for habshine and the V1 will come soon! I hope you can give us a shot! You would regret it.

Habshine - Where all the Habbo's shine.

Habshine (http://www.habshine.com)

Habshine Forum (http://www.habshineforum.com)

[GoldenMerc]

If I become staff, what pension benefits do you offer


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Edited by Samanfa (Forum Manager): Please do not post pointlessly!

[Snex]

Looks alright but it's nothing new. You'll need something unique for any chance to be popular especially since Habbo itself it pretty much dead nowadays.

Also, you need to use connectives more as you have a lot of short sentences. The short sentences could be combined. This will make it easier to read. This paragraph proves the point.

Good luck though.

[ItsMeerken]

Already signed up ;) Good luck lads and lasses :P