Ok take 3 on lido slide im very proud *wip*

[Dudeitsme]

Ok im very proud right now it looks very good still needs alot of work but hopefully when its done it will be a a elite keyword ''maybe''
http://tinypic.com/dp9ykj.png

gotta add
-Ticket box
-Ropes in pool
-Edgeing around the pool
-I gotta make room a bit bigger to add the para thing with the chairs
-Make pool deeper
-Add support for add on on top right

[OMGitsaROSS]

Q line should be sumwhere else or door shud b
:)
looking great sidar tho

[ReInfected]

awesome. but the pool doesnt look like a pool..make it deeper if u can..7/10

[stephen-]

awesome but the extended bit at the top looks outta place 9/10+rep

[Dudeitsme]

yeah i need to move the line ill do that when i add the finising touches rignt now
gotta add
-Ticket box
-Ropes in pool
-Edgeing around the pool
-I gotta make room a bit bigger to add the para thing with the chairs

I think my skills have gotta alot better though

[ItsDave]

:o:o:o AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!! 10/10 +REP!!!!!!!!

[.Lynn]

The slide doesnt really look irght. It looks so jagged

[Dudeitsme]

It isnt done and if you could atleast like talk about the other stuff not just the slide

[.Lynn]

Ok im very proud right now it looks very good still needs alot of work but hopefully when its done it will be a a elite keyword ''maybe''
http://tinypic.com/dp9ykj.png

gotta add
-Ticket box
-Ropes in pool
-Edgeing around the pool
-I gotta make room a bit bigger to add the para thing with the chairs
-Make pool deeper
-Add support for add on on top right
Alllright,

The little arrows on the ground should be a gray colour
The seats are poorly done.
There is a lot of pixels that are out of place and should not be there
Should be shadows under the seats
How is that thing at the top holding up?
The pool looks like the squares are printed on the top.

[joboman]

Lots of pixel errors. mostly what lynn said. and the change thing is floating.
stairs are weird.

[Cavalier2]

Looks great to me , 9/10 :)

[Dudeitsme]

If you both look at the side its a wip

[Cavalier2]

If you look at my comment, it says it's great, and gave you 9/10 o.o (what I'm trying to tell you is I understand it's a WIP)

[Dudeitsme]

not you your cool

[.Lynn]

If you both look at the side its a wip
I think I can read, I just gave some things that u didnt put on yuor list.

[:Hazel]

Alllright,

The little arrows on the ground should be a gray colour
The seats are poorly done.
There is a lot of pixels that are out of place and should not be there
Should be shadows under the seats
How is that thing at the top holding up?
The pool looks like the squares are printed on the top.

Jeez what a roasting he got for that! I'll bare in mind its not finished plus I wouldn't have a clue about doing anything like this, so well done :)

[BLuweesH]

Dude it's good ;)

[joboman]

she knows its a WIP she's just trying to help you improve. geez... if you dont want constructive critisism dont paste alts at all.

[Dudeitsme]

Added more made slide way better so it doesnt look pixeled anymore
http://tinypic.com/dpep2x.png

[.Lynn]

Added more made slide way better so it doesnt look pixeled anymore
http://tinypic.com/dpep2x.png
The slide is way better now. Chairs still need work

[iAdam]

me sees pixel errors

[JT-Fan]

Thats hawt.
6/10

[Xibtz]

i Have Spoted Three Small Errors
• Little Black Dot on The Elevator
• Where the bench it there i sblakc scribbles
• And it looks like the change booth is floating

I Hope these Will help You =]

[Dudeitsme]

errrm look at 2nd page i fixed all errors :/oh yeah look at new thread not this one this one is old