Ok guys you decide if im done or not (Lido slide)

[Dudeitsme]

Omg this should be it
http://tinypic.com/dpg3yg.png

[Kieeran]

Thats prety dammexcellent but the slides not connected to the top

[Dudeitsme]

oopsy dazey rateing?

[Addie]

Yer.Looks finished.Well done 100/100! I liek the girl :D+REP

[Dudeitsme]

tyvm its lynn i pushed her down slide >:)

[Ekalb]

Many errors, some shading could be done, slide isnt joined, maybe more detail on grass and that grteen thing on the left side?
Shadows on chairs?
THe elgs on the person on the slide are strange. - Take a screenie of somone in shorts sitting down and go from there
Also the squares in the pool - the corners of them are wrong
I circled pixel errors
http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/6111/dudepool8ob.png
Slide shoulsd cast a shadow on the water?
Looks good though

[Dudeitsme]

Thanks so many good point outs there im working them out now
you are kewl
-dude

[Ekalb]

Oh and that hole in the ground. THere are errors around it so maybe you could just fill it and put a para in the back or something
EDIT: Ill get you that red para from the habbowood movies if you want?

[Dudeitsme]

I fixed the errors and added shadeing
http://tinypic.com/dpg7pv.png

[joeyjo21]

Thats very cool, when i saw it as a WIP i wasnt to sure about it (i think it was the portaloo tele which put me off), but you've proved me wrong and made an excellent alt. Congrats :-) 9/10 + rep

[Ekalb]

Errors on chairs
Let me just..
Ok there we go
The cahirs have a white bit in them and it should be the same colour as the ground
http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/5972/dudepoolcha0co.png

[Dudeitsme]

oh thats what you meant my bad thanks

[Roboevil]

... ... ...I decide it Isn't done. You could change the walls, make them a little stockier, make the slider alot smoother rather than that blocky look. You should change the girls hair by making the ponytails fly backwards rather than all over the place... Seeing as she is going down the slide.

[iAdam]

i sitll spy pixel errors quite a few want me to point them out for u?

[JT-Fan]

Thats uber hawt wd!

[Rachi]

:OOOOO
Err.
Many pixel errors.
Her mouth is messed up
and hair
and her leg

[iAdam]

:OOOOO
Err.
Many pixel errors.
Her mouth is messed up
and hair
and her leg
Very Correct

[Tommy]

I lurb it x]
The benches could look more habbo'y?

I would prefer if it was a wooden look but i appreciate the fact youre basing it on the lido. Ermm, just touch up on the shading and should be ok.

[H.bubbly]

Well to be h0nest i love it :)

[AndieJohanny]

Work on shading in the water underneath the slide

[ReTaken]

very well done , 9/10 and even elites brilliant :D

[.Lynn]

Doood, I said use the other one, it looks better.

[Wootzeh]

So many pixel errors. you should Dither all of the shading =]

[StripedTiger]

i was trying yo do a ahbbo lido guest room but the swimming pool looked dodgey so i gave in :T

xD im now thinking if a different idea for an alt xP

but its very good :) few errors but no one is perfect ;)
10/10 +rep

[icebox12]

Pretty good alt... a little more shading wouldn't hurt ;)

8.9 / 10

Keep up the good work :)

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Regards

[Cheeseboy76]

Nice 10/10 :) +rep if I can
Love it

[kobi626]

kwl.. but something with the slide thing isn't good... It's not straight

[mr.parasols]

Colour the floor in lido tiles and the slide is wrong.. It starts 2 squares to the right and ends up 2 more squares to the left?!

[--Cookie---]

It's fantastic, but I think it still needs:


More work done on the grass area, add maybe a paasole and a bit better pixel work

Handrails as the top of the slide, you could fall off!

More people.


Apart from that, I LOVE it!

[--Cookie---]

1 rep! Congrats!

Edited by AndieJohanny (Forum Moderator): Please don't double post. Wait for someone else to post before you do.

[aki-1]

The slide looks very bumpy with the little bumps in it maybe u shud try doin it more smooth but still as gd as tht

9.2/10 :) :) :)

Besides that i think its great it must hav took u for ages to do that so gd! :D

[q25]

WoWWWWWWW greaaatttttttt i love it