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akaPenguin
10-10-2004, 03:37 PM
My first alteration ever; for the bus competition.

http://id.lod-squared.com/habboalts/Ghetto Bus.gif

Refocus
10-10-2004, 03:49 PM
it had loads of pixel errors, sorry but 3.5/10

.mcgovlau.
10-10-2004, 04:10 PM
er...sorry i really dont like it

akaPenguin
10-10-2004, 04:25 PM
Lol thanks for the honest critique. I rate it a 4/10 myself. =\ I didn't put a lot of effort to it and I could've done better, but at least I put.. a little effort. xD

:Sound
10-10-2004, 04:25 PM
Ok, try to add shading and be careful as there is pixel errors. Also try to get the writing isometric ;)

iRoss
10-10-2004, 04:44 PM
hmmmmmm IN THE GHETTO :p wooooooo i luv the ghetto bus, not my cup of tea tho... xD

costah
11-10-2004, 09:44 PM
lol, not that good recolouring written not in right place and just very bad all round alt, but as its your 1st, 3/10

terrapin905
12-10-2004, 04:45 PM
I dont like it at all, the writing on the bus is bad, no shading on the bus and pink?!?!?! 2/10

dudey345
12-10-2004, 04:48 PM
soz i dont like it i agree with every one else

Da-Weasel
12-10-2004, 04:51 PM
soz i don like it either
3/10

Max
12-10-2004, 07:37 PM
Hmm...I dont really like it...sorry..U just made it all pink..same colour pink :o
There no black lines...to show the front of the bus and stuff..
I no u can do it if u try a bit harder next time :)
Good Luck ;)

Xx!!M-Man!!xX
13-10-2004, 09:32 PM
soz dnt like it 2 many pixel errors 3/10

Revex
18-10-2004, 11:22 PM
sorry :/ 3/10 its to pink and to may errors and it looks flatish

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