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BloodKane90
24-09-2005, 10:24 PM
This new girl sits in the back of the cornor classroom
Our teacher yells at her all the time
she makes a poem and it always Rhymes
The girls laugh at her and told her to get a life
the girl said I swear im going to kill you with a knife...
The girl played on her own each day
Her real name was called Nai
I asked her if she wants to play
She Said ok
These girls came up to her and pushed her out the way
i was a boy and i stopped and said hey
One of the girls was my Girl Friend who i loved so much
i dumped her and she lost her touch
The girl called nai
Killed herself yesterday
I wanted to ask her
Will you be my gf
But it never actually got to that
ill miss her what a way to end a day with killing your self
Under a train

In Loveing meomry Of

Nai

Born - 1990 - 2005

True Story and was going to ask her out sadly died by going under a train
If you are being bullied go straight to your headteacher or mum don't be forced to kill youself

Theres nothing more important to life Sadly she never lived a life she died at such a young age :(

Menshevik
25-09-2005, 07:30 PM
Horrible poem, good intentions.

RedStratocas
25-09-2005, 07:39 PM
This new girl sits in the back of the cornor classroom
Our teacher yells at her all the time
she makes a poem and it always Rhymes
The girls laugh at her and told her to get a life
the girl said I swear im going to kill you with a knife...
The girl played on her own each day
Her real name was called Nai
I asked her if she wants to play
She Said ok
These girls came up to her and pushed her out the way
i was a boy and i stopped and said hey
One of the girls was my Girl Friend who i loved so much
i dumped her and she lost her touch
The girl called nai
Killed herself yesterday
I wanted to ask her
Will you be my gf
But it never actually got to that
ill miss her what a way to end a day with killing your self
Under a train

In Loveing meomry Of

Nai

Born - 1990 - 2005

True Story and was going to ask her out sadly died by going under a train
If you are being bullied go straight to your headteacher or mum don't be forced to kill youself

Theres nothing more important to life Sadly she never lived a life she died at such a young age :(

You told this story twice, and the last time it was different, so for some reason, I think you are making this up for attention

BloodKane90
25-09-2005, 07:39 PM
You really p me off the other one was a story so shut up

RedStratocas
25-09-2005, 07:58 PM
You really p me off the other one was a story so shut up

Then why did you say it was true?

BloodKane90
25-09-2005, 07:59 PM
a story which is true Geezh

RedStratocas
25-09-2005, 08:14 PM
a story which is true Geezh

Wait, which one is true? One of these (probably both though) is made up, because they are both the same storyline, but a few things are changed.

Rosie
25-09-2005, 08:17 PM
Whether its true or not its getting the message across, And yeah its touching !

EletricMornings
25-09-2005, 08:19 PM
ugh.its um.Strange.
try to use english next time

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