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EletricMornings
26-09-2005, 07:53 PM
If i hide behind this smile would anyone see me cry.
If i let my hair fall across myface,woul anyone see my pain.
If i pull down my sleeves would anyone see the scars
If i looked down at my feet,would anyone see the blush,
If i tried say my thoughts,would anyone stop and listen
if i wiped my eyes each day would anyone ask if i was ok.





Its not done eyt

Orange_Parasol
26-09-2005, 07:54 PM
Yay :) !!

EletricMornings
26-09-2005, 07:58 PM
O.o
quick

Designer-Loz
26-09-2005, 08:10 PM
it won't let me leave rep, the link don't work 4 it

EletricMornings
26-09-2005, 08:14 PM
O.o Whyyyyyyyyyyy

Janumz
27-09-2005, 03:42 PM
Heh.. that poem describes me xD.. Lol, +Rep ;P

EletricMornings
04-10-2005, 06:30 PM
Hem i need ideas for some more lines

ilovejordan
04-10-2005, 06:43 PM
Ooh its good so far :p + rep

EletricMornings
04-10-2005, 06:56 PM
*pats cascas*

Victimized
04-10-2005, 06:59 PM
I love it!
Im trying to think of lines but it seems as if you have said everything really.

EletricMornings
04-10-2005, 07:11 PM
O.o
thanks benben

Victimized
04-10-2005, 07:14 PM
What does "You must spread some reputation around" mean?

That just came up when i tried to rep you.

EletricMornings
04-10-2005, 07:34 PM
j00 already repped me you narna
AND GET THE BLOOODY ANTISPAMMER THINGY OUT UR SIG >=(

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