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brodeo
01-10-2005, 07:07 PM
Took quite some time.
Hardest Part: The Plant Probably
Easiest Part: The Lift
Preffered Part: The blinds by far
Worst Part: The automatic doors possibly...
Ratings, Improvements, C&C...
http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/5475/office11lh.png

I was thinking of doing the other four floors, shall I?

allykin
01-10-2005, 07:09 PM
dats gd
aint ur signature bexs avator?

onlymeagain05
01-10-2005, 07:09 PM
I was thinking of doing the other four floors, shall I?

yeah u shud i think it brill +rep and it shud b elites

Friction
01-10-2005, 07:11 PM
Looks horride sorry..
No tables with computers?!
That's there whole job..
4/10

brodeo
01-10-2005, 07:13 PM
I'm sorry but are you blind, this is a reception.

Thanks for the comments for people who bothered to look more...

Danzilla
01-10-2005, 07:15 PM
Wow this is really good, 10/10. ;)

brodeo
01-10-2005, 07:21 PM
Thanks very much daz!

Friction
01-10-2005, 07:23 PM
Unless I'm extremely blind it says no where about a reception yet in the title it says;


[FINISHED!] Habbo Offices

Focos on the office part. Usally used as a term where work is preformed. So habbo works on computers theres none there..

And this little bit was added after i commented;


I was thinking of doing the other four floors, shall I?

brodeo
01-10-2005, 07:27 PM
#1 There are no receptions in office blocks?
#2 That was in my 1st post from the start - check the quote from the first guy who posted :)

Megalomaniac
01-10-2005, 07:29 PM
im afraid i'll have to agree with firction, it isnt so good. 3/10 sorry you chose horrid colours .

Disaronno
01-10-2005, 07:29 PM
It's Alright 8/10

Suggestions/Errors:

Near The Table Leg
Try A Different Colour For The Wall Of The Reception.

Axel
01-10-2005, 07:31 PM
Its ok 8/10
Good effort, Keep it up!

brodeo
01-10-2005, 07:34 PM
Thanks for the comments.

Refocus
02-10-2005, 10:51 AM
Took quite some time.
Hardest Part: The Plant Probably
Easiest Part: The Lift
Preffered Part: The blinds by far
Worst Part: The automatic doors possibly...
Ratings, Improvements, C&C...
http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/5475/office11lh.png

I was thinking of doing the other four floors, shall I?

i dont really like it and i'll tell you why... the colours offend my eyes, what office have you walked into, and see a desk with its own volume control?(its a bit loud) the wall looks abit like a hospitals. the plant is gr8, the rug is gr8. sorry for the harshness, its just my opinion. i like your attention to detail, its a very good effort and an ok result.

plant and rug : 8/10 *thumbs up*
effort : 9/10
alt : 4/10 (because of colours)
four floors would be gr8 if in another colour :)

Adam$
02-10-2005, 10:59 AM
very good, 9/10, except there are gaps in the blinds. Sort it out, then 10/10. ^_^

brodeo
02-10-2005, 11:21 AM
Thanks for all the comments and such, but the gaps in the blinds? Aren't some blinds sorta messed up? I think if i did it perfect it would look too fake.

Oooh and can someone point out the error by the table leg?

Pilgrim-Soul
02-10-2005, 11:27 AM
Took quite some time.
Hardest Part: The Plant Probably
Easiest Part: The Lift
Preffered Part: The blinds by far
Worst Part: The automatic doors possibly...
Ratings, Improvements, C&C...
http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/5475/office11lh.png

I was thinking of doing the other four floors, shall I?
I Like It. 10/10 ^_^

Addie
02-10-2005, 11:30 AM
I cant even see it"

Pilgrim-Soul
02-10-2005, 11:31 AM
I cant even see it"
Your A Spoon Then. ¬_¬"

brodeo
02-10-2005, 11:36 AM
Lol thanks for the rating pilgrim-soul.

Pilgrim-Soul
02-10-2005, 01:36 PM
Lol thanks for the rating pilgrim-soul.
No Problemo.

brodeo
02-10-2005, 07:39 PM
Thanks all for the comments + reps :)

Newest Alt:
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=92788

Kimmeh.
02-10-2005, 08:24 PM
Dollars, it's very good but can I just say there actually is a Receptoin in most Offices these days. But it's very good. Try the other four floors and see how they come out :)

Xibtz
03-10-2005, 12:42 AM
its nto the great:
needs mroe black lines
Numbers on elevator look dumb
the plant is weird shape
6.5\10

CutieJamie
03-10-2005, 12:46 AM
It is very bright!

Luayminator
03-10-2005, 03:03 AM
Well that looks very perfected 9/10 but I dont like the colours chosen. And on the wall for the separated space, try to make it clear where it bends to become the horizontal line. But a nice try.

Bioda
03-10-2005, 03:26 AM
That's awesome!!!!!!!

brodeo
03-10-2005, 06:50 AM
Thanks all :)

ItsDave
03-10-2005, 03:13 PM
thats well good, a lil bit of work though needed on the floor dont like colour to bright.. 9/10

Colourful™
03-10-2005, 03:16 PM
Very good. 10/10

Dk.
03-10-2005, 03:18 PM
looks abit weird with the yellow kinda blends the bars with the floor bit hard to see

Sweet_Rosey
04-10-2005, 12:02 AM
Its way to bright. and whats that thing on the floor next to the plant?

-sFusion-
04-10-2005, 12:09 AM
Bad choice of colors sorry, and making the Habbo(x) Office will be hard after Roboevil's alt of the Habbox Offices :o Needs more details as well
4/10

Sweet_Rosey
04-10-2005, 02:05 AM
What if you made the yellow desk look like wood? maybe a darker shade of blue for the floors?

.Lynn
04-10-2005, 02:25 AM
Outline everything in black, it will look better.

Cooler3000
04-10-2005, 04:43 AM
I like roboevil's better, to improve urs maybe u should add some people lol :)

brodeo
04-10-2005, 05:38 PM
Hehe, thanks for the comments. But this project is dead :)

HellyBelly
04-10-2005, 05:41 PM
I'm sure I've seen those blinds before, might have been you, but Ill come back to it, I'll go looking for proof before I accuse.

brodeo
04-10-2005, 05:44 PM
Lol, it was me. I used them in the 'curtains for sure' comp and i did a seperate post :)

HellyBelly
04-10-2005, 05:46 PM
Lol, it was me. I used them in the 'curtains for sure' comp and i did a seperate post :)
Thats the one! Ok, sorry about that, but you know what rippers are like :rolleyes:

Victimized
04-10-2005, 05:49 PM
The colours are burning my eyes! I can't see how you can get that in elites, sorry but some people gave it 10/10 i would give it 6/10.
And that yellow bit, is that meant to be a wall/bar/desk area?

Alex-Stacy
04-10-2005, 10:42 PM
As Lynn said, outline everything in black.

The yellow bar, nearest to the elevator looks awful, because it looks like the side and the surface are both the same colour. ~My C&C for you.~

~ Stace. x

joboman
07-10-2005, 06:39 PM
Colors sting my eyes. Plant pot isn't iso. Needs computers and black outlines

Faye
07-10-2005, 06:44 PM
i love it and i think you should do the next floors :)

brodeo
07-10-2005, 06:52 PM
Sorry, as i said earlier :) This project is sorta dead.

NoobInised
08-10-2005, 12:03 AM
no computers, chairs e.t.c 5/1º

KCMac
08-10-2005, 08:29 AM
Looks really good </3 1 rep

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