xhannx
06-10-2005, 09:00 PM
I shortened it a bit... But It still gets the same message across
Michelle at our new school was no beauty. But there was something about her. EVERY girls lad was taken by her. Thats why they named her The Boyfriend Thief, about a year before Michelle arrived me and my best friend Luke hooked up and we've been inseperable ever since. I knew Michelle couldn't get Luke. Because he didn't LIKE those kind of girls. So I even went as far as offering to look after her.
After a few days, I introduced Michelle to Luke as we walked too school.
"Morning!" Michelle grinned, sitting on the wall, showing off her legs in a very short grey school skirt "Ooh I think I know your mate Mark, I got off with him the other night. He was RUBBISH!"
I sighed, she was always doing that, Mark already had a girlfriend but that hadn't stopped either him nor michelle.
After school Michelle and I walked up to the bus stop and Luke caught us up.
"We should get the bus together Luke, seeing as we live near each other and all" she said.
I frowned, how did she know where he lived? They said goodbye and hopped on the bus.
Later on I texted Luke. "Hiya, wanna meet up, Love you so much!" But no reply. I didn't want to hassle him, but something was up...
Saturday came and went.
Then, on Sunday I got a text from Luke. All it said was Sorry.
What was he sorry for? I rang him straight away.
"Heloooo?" said a cheery voice on the line. It belonged to Michelle.
I felt sick, he couldn't have! The phone fell from my hand, realising there was no other answer, I sat and sobbed.
Since it happened, I've heard they were seen going back too Luke's house. And you can guess the rest. They were together for two whole weeks.
Michelle never apologized. Luke, however, has spent the last two months begging for forgiveness and playing our songs down the phone.
Sometime I cry while he cries. I tell him I wish I could forgive him but I can't.
Do you want to know why?
Well, because everything special about him disapeared from the moment he kissed michelles unfeeling lips.
So this is a warning to everyone, she may be sweet, she may be no beauty, but she's the boyfriend thief, and who knows, she could be after yours!"
How touching is that story! It nearly made me cry :( Specially the last paragraph and the two last lines.
"From the moment he kissed michelles unfeeling lips." and "And who knows, she could be after yours!" kinda spooks you
Michelle at our new school was no beauty. But there was something about her. EVERY girls lad was taken by her. Thats why they named her The Boyfriend Thief, about a year before Michelle arrived me and my best friend Luke hooked up and we've been inseperable ever since. I knew Michelle couldn't get Luke. Because he didn't LIKE those kind of girls. So I even went as far as offering to look after her.
After a few days, I introduced Michelle to Luke as we walked too school.
"Morning!" Michelle grinned, sitting on the wall, showing off her legs in a very short grey school skirt "Ooh I think I know your mate Mark, I got off with him the other night. He was RUBBISH!"
I sighed, she was always doing that, Mark already had a girlfriend but that hadn't stopped either him nor michelle.
After school Michelle and I walked up to the bus stop and Luke caught us up.
"We should get the bus together Luke, seeing as we live near each other and all" she said.
I frowned, how did she know where he lived? They said goodbye and hopped on the bus.
Later on I texted Luke. "Hiya, wanna meet up, Love you so much!" But no reply. I didn't want to hassle him, but something was up...
Saturday came and went.
Then, on Sunday I got a text from Luke. All it said was Sorry.
What was he sorry for? I rang him straight away.
"Heloooo?" said a cheery voice on the line. It belonged to Michelle.
I felt sick, he couldn't have! The phone fell from my hand, realising there was no other answer, I sat and sobbed.
Since it happened, I've heard they were seen going back too Luke's house. And you can guess the rest. They were together for two whole weeks.
Michelle never apologized. Luke, however, has spent the last two months begging for forgiveness and playing our songs down the phone.
Sometime I cry while he cries. I tell him I wish I could forgive him but I can't.
Do you want to know why?
Well, because everything special about him disapeared from the moment he kissed michelles unfeeling lips.
So this is a warning to everyone, she may be sweet, she may be no beauty, but she's the boyfriend thief, and who knows, she could be after yours!"
How touching is that story! It nearly made me cry :( Specially the last paragraph and the two last lines.
"From the moment he kissed michelles unfeeling lips." and "And who knows, she could be after yours!" kinda spooks you