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Amyia
10-10-2005, 06:07 PM
We had to write a poem for Anthology about children who are in need of help and it's taken me ages to do this even though it looks simple it was really hard.

Hello, this box is yours
a special gift for you
full of magical things
full of wonders new.
Please look inside
carefully you must
or else otherwise
you'll disturb the angel dust.
And whenever you're feeling down
and maybe a little low
just whisper into your box
just let your angel know.
Because you have an angel
who will always be very near
and that angel will look out for you
in that you can have no fear.

Amyia
11-10-2005, 05:57 PM
Forgot to mention please rate if you would just i need to know as it's my english work. Thanks :eusa_ange

Addie
12-10-2005, 11:59 AM
Thats really good.

CursedHeart
12-10-2005, 01:11 PM
i heart it. rep. and sporklet i love your sig xD


edit: cant rep :'( if i havent repped you in 24 hrs then pm me going OI lol

Addie
12-10-2005, 02:41 PM
i heart it. rep. and sporklet i love your sig xD


edit: cant rep :'( if i havent repped you in 24 hrs then pm me going OI lol

Lmao. Thankz i hart urs :D)

KCMac
12-10-2005, 02:42 PM
Impressive :) Me like
10/10 1 rep

Amyia
12-10-2005, 03:15 PM
Thanks everyone for the Rep :eusa_ange I really don't mind about the Rep CursedHeart.

CursedHeart
12-10-2005, 04:07 PM
done it now *big grin* HEY KCMAC AMAGADZ KREW 4EVAAAAAAAA♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥v

Stacey.
12-10-2005, 04:11 PM
Wow! That's a lovely poem! I done an anthology when I was in Yr 7, I think. Anyway, your poem is great!

10/10

EDIT- Sorry, I can't give rep, must spread some! *Gets to work spreading* :)

Yazamiinx
14-10-2005, 05:40 PM
Loved it. :-) Rep for you.

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