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KickerFliper
11-10-2005, 08:51 PM
This seems to be my first posted story here, I havent written one since I was in school *Yons Ago* So be nice :)

Couldnt think of a Title ;D

As John woke up he could feel the warm comfortable bed under him, his eyes opened slowly to reveal a small room in which his mum and dad stood, it took John a while to realise where he was, his lifeless dull room, just like any other, blue walls, blue ceiling, bed and wardrobe. He however suited the colours of the wall, John was a dull boy, not much with him, always blue, upset and unhappy, his parents knew that John wasn’t the most popular person in school but they never expected severe bullying like the bullying he has.
All John remembered of the day before was being approached by 3 bulky boys in black coats, then with one blow being knocked to the ground. This had happened to John lots, he was always to scared or Upset to mention it, he kept it up in his head wondering why he should be bullied, why not someone else. His arms could hardly move his mum walked over.
”John? Its your mum, are you ok? You seemed to of had a nasty fall.” His mum said.
John looked at her blankly and wondered to himself how she could think he had fell, when there were massive bruises and cuts on his face, scared and bruised, John fell back to sleep.
The next morning John woke up ton a bright sunny day filled with birds singing. Unfortunately John didn’t feel like getting up and going to see the lovely morning sky, he lay there, limp, not wanting to get up, but eventually he had to he thought to himself, he got out of his bed, made it then went and got into his Navy Blue School Uniform, his walk to school was fine as it was only up the road, he met two people on the way who just insulted him and gave him horrid looks, but John carried on, he got into school and went to his form room, he sat and waited there until the bell, being kicked as people walked past, he didn’t care, he just took it.
The bell rang 10 minutes later and John got up, his Tutor arrived and let him in along with his classmates. Form was the most boring time of the day, John hated it, the teacher moaned on and on about not getting detentions and not bullying, John simply ignored him and carried on drawing.
The bell for first lesson went and John set of for his dreaded Maths class, he knew the teacher hated him and dreaded it as the teacher (Mr. White) had always threatened to call his parents about no homework and terrible work even though it looked fine and even worse about it he had to sit next to Steven Glen, the biggest bully in his year, all Steven did was go around with his friends push and shoving people younger than him, even if all they were doing was waiting for there next class, no one dared telling any teachers on him as they knew they’d get attacked by his cronies.
Maths went on for over an hour and only 15 minutes in Steven had started asking for the answer off John, John had refused until Steven showed him a penknife. John agreed and Steven copied him, unfortunately Mr. White caught them and gave them both a detention slip, he obviously blamed John for it. The day went on pretty much the same, at break people stole his snacks, at dinner people stole his money and on the way home he’d get punched in the arm by several people.
John made it home, went to his room and only came down for his tea, which he ate and went back upstairs, his parents never wondered what he was doing, they always came to the conclusion he was on his computer or watching his TV. They were never right, all the time he spent in his room, he spent thinking, not about games and homework but things like friends and one girl, Alexandra Key, for many years now she had been the one, the one John had wanted, but she never noticed him, she was like a goddess and he was the worthless slave, but he didn’t care he just thought to himself several attempts to get her, which all seemed to far fetched. He never knew the complications he’d have trying to get her.
After many hours of thinking he went to sleep, no drink or super, just straight to sleep. Waking up the next day thinking it’ll all get better, he dreamt of a windy day, Alex stood alone and imagining himself kissing her, but today the complications would get even worse, he’d heard of a new couple in his year and wondered, who? Maybe Lucy? Or Emma? Or even Steven, he was right with one, Steven…But he’d not found out who it was yet. Who was the girl with Steven, to be honest he didn’t care really, but wanted to know just so he could insult Steven if it was a dog.
Johns day was fine, he set off home, no food, no money, but thoughts in his mind, who was the girl Stevens with? He just hoped she was uglier than Steven, but then said to himself, is that possible?
Home at last with only 1 punch on his way he went to his room, had tea, then slept, he got up thinking, Saturday what a wonderful day, no school, John went out and roamed the streets, his parents were against it saying he might fall again, but John reassured them and left, on his way to the met stop he saw Steven with a brown haired girl, pants, smaller than Steven and wondered…Who is it? But then just as the face struck he burst into tears and ran as fast as he could, wondering why, why had she picked him, the face of that one girl, the one he had left for his own, how could Alex of got with Steven.
Crying on the wall of the Church Inn Pub he wiped his tears as he saw Amy and Connie pass, they simply laughed at him and walked off rushing away as though there was a stinking smell around him, John didn’t know what was about to happen and probably didn’t want to, he heard foot steps a bang and fell off is wall in pain, Steven was there with a tub of petrol and a match he’d poured petrol around the back of John and lit it the flames hit John along with the petrol tub. John rolled around in pain and heard running, Steven had got away with it again, John forced himself upright with 2 hands and bent over hands on his knees wondering how he’d knew John was there and got behind him without making a sound.
John woke up Sunday just thinking about the marks on his back from the petrol canister, he had a bruise bigger than his head on his back and it stung to say the least.
Sunday was another day John enjoyed, he went out into the woods for a walk and didn’t know how anyone could find him there, he sat drawing the animals, river and trees, once again he heard foot steps, he turned and saw Alex and Steven walking through the woods holding hands, the lay down and rolled around, John knew what they were going to do so he just left without making a sound, he hated this, the one thing that made him happy now made him even angrier, John being a nice boy had never done anything to hurt anyone in his life, but he was on the verge of starting.
John simply walked until he got to a small tunnel where he was recently attacked by the black coated figures. He sat and thought about what Alex was doing with him in the woods but found it to horrid to even think about, John now hated his whole life, no friends, no fun, no life, the only people who cared for him treated him as a child, John wasn’t taking this any more, he was in school the next day, he planned to stand up for himself once and for all.
Waking up that morning, getting ready for school, pac'king his bag and setting off, shaking as he walked to school, he saw them, Steven and Alex walking hand in hand, Steven went into the shop Alex waited outside, clear view of Alex, as he walked past she spoke,
”Hi John.”
At the John had to do quick thinking, he simply replied,
”Hi Alex” and Blushed, scared Steven would come out and catch them speaking.
”How are you John?” Alex asked politely.
”I’m err…Fine” John replied with a smile.
”Good, I’m good to, want to walk up with me and Steven?” Alex asked well-mannered, John looked both ways and replied,
”I’m not sure Steven likes me that much”
Alex simply smiled and said
”If he hurts you, tell me, ill put him in place” with this Steven came out and John went off hurriedly.
John sat in form wondering about what Alex had said, would she actually put Steven in place? He went through break near Alex, without Steven even looking at him.
Dinner was different, Alex went off to see a teacher leaving John stranded, John knew what would happen, Steven and his friends approached, John simply bowed his head and waited. From no where he thought he’d seen a gleaming light, but no, Alex had walked straight through the gang of boys and picked John up with o trouble and walked off towards Steven, John just thought she was going to kiss him as he pursed his lips but what happened next made even John laugh, Alex lifted her hand back and with and almighty ***** slapped Steven on the face knocking him down in one.
Alex walked off with a satisfied look on her face.
John was crying with joy, Steven taken out by a girl, floored and hurt, Johns day couldn’t get better.
He skipped home, went upstairs and for the first time felt happy.
After one of his best nights sleep John got up and looked at his calendar, he had clearly marked ‘School Disco’ on it for today and had planned to walk through the woods on the way to school.
He set off, walking through the woods towards the direction of school, it may take 10 minutes longer but John didn’t care, it may have been the wises choice of his life, as he was walking through he heard a scream, a girl. He ran towards it without thinking, then he saw it, Steven standing over Alex with a knife, shouting abuse, calling her horrid names, at this John flared up, knew what to do, he walked forwards, he saw blood trickling from Alex’s palm, he’d cut he once, the second could be fatal, behind the mill was a place where people hide random objects from wood to stun guns, John knew this as he’d saw it a couple of weeks before, he searched right to the bottom of this pile as quick as possible, found the stun gun and walked up to Steven, with one sharp shock to his side, Steven was downed, crying tears Alex breathing deeply, John took the knife and tossed it away, pulled up Alex by her good hand and walked her to school, the office put a bandage on her and told them to go to form and this was the point where John knew the time was right, he shot out a question he knew was good.
”Alex, will you go to the Disco with me?”
Alex looked taken back and simply nodded as they walked off towards the classrooms.
With a look of triumph, John smiled and kissed Alex.

The End ;D

How good Eh? ;D
Lol

CursedHeart
11-10-2005, 09:00 PM
sadly people dont tend to read each others articles / poems etc.

I like it. Rep given

*angry face* cant rep but will

KickerFliper
11-10-2005, 09:13 PM
Lol Thanks, People never take time to read Pfft...

Angel-Light
11-10-2005, 09:31 PM
Awwwwwww sweet story :) Nice to see the guy gets the girl in the end <3

Rep+

(Did you use my story as a guide or something? rofl)

CursedHeart
11-10-2005, 10:39 PM
lmao i said that and people start reading things. no ones read mine tho :O

Addie
12-10-2005, 11:19 AM
10/10 :eusa_danc Rep is giving............................now

KickerFliper
12-10-2005, 02:55 PM
Lmao Thanks,

Hayley ♥ I used someof it as a guide :)

It was a very helpful guide aswel. :)

Moo
15-10-2005, 07:01 PM
:] Very Nice. Very touching. Very long..

KickerFliper
15-10-2005, 08:23 PM
Yea, I go on with myself

Its 1,992 words long I think last time I word counted ;D

Camerons
16-10-2005, 04:37 PM
I read around 10 lines as i dont like reading that much. Its amazing so many people put lots of effort in to these stories. :p

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