Vampiet

I hope you all enjoy my story its about a girl who gets blooded (turned into a vampire) when she is thirteen to save her friend's life its not completed yet obviously but tell me what you think so far ignore grammer and spelling mistakes

Vampires are the strangest of creatures there faster than humans stronger than humans
and feast upon humans.
Once in a world it was to be thought that only humans and animals lived on the planet
little did they know vampires lived among them feeding while they where asleep high
upon mount kuik lived the vampire clan. You could come and go whenever you felt like
it but most of the clan lived high in the mountain humans never knew they exsisted
and that was how it was supposed to stay.

Chapter one
My name is Joanna Amity I was just a girl when i found out and turned into a creature
of the night. I always remember that night like it was just yesterday.
It all started on friday morning at school it was break time me and my best friend
Haden where just chatting on the wall at school about this new club called Ikon down
town we where gunna go there tonight I asked my mam if i could sleep round his earlier
this morning.
"So our plan is that I come round yours straight away your dad's going to work at nine
and your mam is visiting your grandma?" I asked
"Yeh that's right" he snapped
"Oooh touchy tounchy grouchy today arn't we Haden my boy, anyway then we sneak out at
half nine and goto Ikon"I laughed
Haden looked at me with his dark brown eyes I saw fear there had been asults recently
in the center of town and Ikon wasnt far of from there.
"Im not so sure about this........Somthings wrong" whispered Haden
"and how do you know that?" I questioned him
"I I i've got a feeling" He answered softly
Just at that moment the bell rang for third period I couldnt wait till tonight.
When i look back i should have took Hadens advice.


I went home straight after put my things into a rucksack said my goodbyes and went
to Hadens.
I knocked on the door three times this was mine and hadens secret nock and he opened the
door straight away.
After about half an hour Haden cheered up and at half eight we got ready.
Haden was wearing a white shirt he had his brown hair spicked up and blue jeans on
he looked stunning looked about 19 ofcourse.
Then there was me with a glittery black top on and a short mini skirt with silver lining
at the bottem i only looked seventeen but i had my fake ID on me just incase.
At nine we started walking to town, yes walking we where only 13 well i was Haden was 14.

About half an hour later we where just around the corner from the Ikon I hated this
place even in the daytime to many dark allyways and shadows I hated the night.
As me and Haden where chatting Haden stopped me
"I have that feeling again there's someone here... Run!"
I panicked.Me and Haden ran as fast as we could until he slipped.
I turned and hid in the alleyway hearing the screams of my best friend I ran out and
shouted.
"STOP!" I shouted to a pale tall man he laughed as the blood dripped down his chin
and onto Hadens white shirt.
"Or what you're going to hit me with you handbag"He mocked me I knew there was nothing
I could do im not a fighter I never was.
"Look i have a proposition for you"he said
"Carry on" I snapped at him
"Well it's simple really a life for a life he lives you turn into a creature of the
night"He sneered
At that moment my life was about to change... For the worse.


Chapter 2
I stood there thinking it over I was the one who suggested it to Haden if it wasn't for
me he would still be alive.
"Fine ill do it but on one condition I come with you you train me I'll be your
assistant"I replied
"Deal"He snickered
"By the way my name is sirius Adermin just call me Mr.Adermin"
"Cure my friend and then lets go" I snapped
Mr.Adermin mumbled somthing under his breath
"He will wake up in 10 minutes or so he'll be fine by the way we cant just pick up and go
do you know how much trouble it will cause we have to fake your death"
"Well make me a vampire then "I snapped
Adermin made a slit in my right arm and ****ed some blood out Then swallowed it then cut
himself ****ed up the blood and pushed it into my cut I winced with pain I felt as
though I was going to be sick Adermin looked like it also.
"Well that was fun now how do I fake my death"I asked weakly
"Drink this leave the rest to me when your buried ill come get you ok"
I nodded and drank the potion and became all stiff I couldn't speak or breath properly
"Right this is going to hurt when you wake up"
Adermin raised a sharp knife and stabbed me in the stomach I didnt feel it must have
been the affects of the potion after he removed the knife
"Ill come get you dont worry"The pale Vampire promised
Then he disappered into the night without a trace I stayed lieing there for like 3
minutes the heard Haden waking up.
"Joanna!" At that moment it was the hardest part of my life Haden screamed and cried
What have I put everyone through?

Two days later was the funeral everyone one was there except Sirius Adermin all I
heard was the coffing being dropped onto the ground Haden screaming for me to come
back my mother weeping and mud dropping onto the coffin.It turned to night
and i heared a shovel digging me up and a *****driver opening the coffin.
I started getting my senses back in five minutes.
"How do you feel young vampire"
"Dont call me that vampires are evil they kill people!" I screamed at him.
"No they dont after I ****ed some blood out of him I was going to help him anyway"
I tutted knowing he was right.
"Go for a walk you need to work the stiffness"
I nodded then went for a walk.
My hearing had defnitly improved i could hear Sirius Putting the mud onto the coffin.
"You ready to go"Sirius shouted
I took one look back.
"Yes Sirius I'm hungry"
"Me too"Sirius smiled


Chapter 3



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