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Original writing

The scene sets off all carm also happy. It is night time all dark, the girl named Emma.
Went for a swim the boy named Chris flowed her but he was drunk and he fell over passed out till the morning. There was then a lovely sun set. The girl is screaming like mad but no one can hear her because all the music. The shark no’s there is some one in the light blue sea. A little kid was playing in the garden also he cuts his hand open not deep though. His dad gets a phone call then he has got to go as soon as he puts the phone down. Chris then wakes up and relies that Emma has gone missing so he reports a girl missing later on there was a girl font dead well I should say someone fond a dead hand on the floor. Chris was then at the police office to be questioned by the chef. The chef then takes a look at the items in the shop he buys loads of paint from the store so that he can close the beach due to the shark attack.
The chef starts talking to the mother of a little kid is sitting down on the big sandy beach.
She allows the kid to go swimming in the big lovely blue sea there is a few kids messing around in the water