Broken Tear

A song I made.. Please rate =]


I notice you there
Sitting all alone
I saw you had no friends
I saw you had no home
It was hard for me
To give you a cheer
You always brought me away
It made me live in fear

I can't get away from you
I can't ever break free
I just want to get on with my life

I want to be me..

Your still getting me down
Your taking me all the way
My life is cold, it's empty now
It seems to fade, someday somehow
Your love always builds down my life
The bubbles start to increase
Because your still in fear
I still have a broken tear

I offered you a life
You didnt accept my grant
I left in misery
While you screamed and rant

I cant get out this hole
It wont let me break free
Cant you ever listen
Will you ever believe me

I can't get away from you
I can't ever break free
I just want to get on with my life

I want to be me..

Your still getting me down
Your taking me all the way
My life is cold, it's empty now
It seems to fade, someday somehow
Your love always builds down my life
The bubbles start to increase
Because your still in fear
I still have a broken tear

Leave me alone, get away from me
You've caused so much pain
So much misery
I cant ever leave you
I will always need you

Oh oh oh oh
Your still in fear
I still have a broken tear........

Your still getting me down
Your taking me all the way
My life is cold, it's empty now
It seems to fade, someday somehow
Your love always builds down my life
The bubbles start to increase
Because your still in fear
I still have a broken tear

Your still getting me down
Your taking me all the way
My life is cold, it's empty now
It seems to fade, someday somehow
Your love always builds down my life
The bubbles start to increase
Because your still in fear
I still have a broken tear

Don't like it. 1/10. No emotion..

That looks really good. Send me a copy through when its completed with tune <3

sorry kerian dont beleive you did this for a second, and you and emotion? you DONT show any towards any body expecialy kez , yea like i sed i dont beleive you wrote it 0/10

Not good, wrong board, die.