My first ever alt

Hello this is my first ever alt I made it today and its really crawpy and it should go play crawps on crawps casino island.Well here it is:
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EDIT: Nice shoes eh?

um bit plain but 6.5/10

Keep it up m8 ;)

EDIT: funneh photoshop "finishing touches" (good though)

Whats with the dark fading stuff around it?
Can't you just say cr*p its much easier to understand.
5/10

Ok thanks guys :)

I made it dark so it would look evil

like the x on the head.
x on head:10/10
overall: 8.7/10

Thanks

Its needs shading, not so bright, the fork needs work too. 4/10

Posted in wrong section and pretty simple. Not bad for a first alt though 6/10

Call in the ministers of Shading!

Also, dont take peoples eyes off of the alt by decorating the Bkground. =3

T'is in the right section :s

First recolouring

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