Story of a Little girl.

Hello There, I just thought i'd write a story. And it's called....
Story of a little girl. [PART ONE]
There was once a little girl, Something was strange about her though. The whole village knew there was something weird about her...But they just couldn't figure out what that was. This girl has a whole adventure on her hands. Just will she complete this and finish this 'Adventure' alive?

''Hello Children'' Said the town Mayor. 'Good you could all make it, Now as you may know tommorow is a VERY important day. It's where the town's children show of there Dancing skills to other Town children and the best dance from the town will win a Throphy and the dance hroup shall win something VERY special, But we wouldn't want to ruin the suprise now would we?'' While the Mayor was talking there was a girl, Day dreaming But she wasn't day dreaming about a nice thing, Something else..Someone was saying the words: You are wrong constantly in her head. She keeps trying to wake up but she just can't It's like..It's like it's not a dream You can't escape it. She screamed in the Town hall..EVERYONE looked at her..The mayor gave her a strange look..The girl thought a second..She said to her self: The mayor looks a lot like the person who is telling me i'm wrong. But it just couldn't be the Mayor, How can a human get into my dream? It's probally made up. Nothing to worry about now is there?
But she thinks not. It could well be the Mayor. There has always been something Fishy about the mayor. But what could the girl be Wrong for?
At the end of the meeting with the Mayor she stayed in her seat, The mayor gave her a wink and as the mayor walked past she heared a voice from her head saying: You shall die.
She dosen't want to hear anymore whispers from her head, But she has had enough of it, And she walks up to the Mayor and explains and something..Something happens, I just wish I never saw it.

There's my story part 1 Hope you enjoy it. I hope there is a lot of Suspense in it..But I tried my best.
Be sure to read part 2 if you liked part 1!
Also you may post negative comments, Because I know it's probally a really bad story.