Habbo Character (1st alteration - ever)

Hey, this is my first alteration.

Please rate */10 and giving me ways to improve.

I edited the shirt, to a different colour and the hair (obviously)

http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/2710/1stalt6qz.png

Well i am not an expert but i like it! the hair looks pretty cool. 9/10:D Good Job! *better than the ones i can make XD*

All you've done is change the hair and it's not very good.

No shading, just basically black lines added.

It was a bold head when I started, so I didn't just add black lines. There is vague shading, but as I said - it's my first.

The hair needs shading, and I dont really like the birghter top. 7/10

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Originally Posted by Sephiroth

All you've done is change the hair and it's not very good.

No shading, just basically black lines added.

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He has done shading, but i admit it's not very visable. But not all shading is, look on habbo you don't exactly strap your face against the monitor looking for pixels, or do you? (don't mean this rudely)

http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/5...dingrev2oh.png

I've maxamized the size, and as you can see there is parts of shading. It's hard to see as some colours are very simular. I had to invert colours to show you this

Also on the feet, you've removed most of the shading (don't have a original pixture of it) Tbh your doing well, no one makes a elite alteration on there first go. Look at some tutorials on sites or some in hxf graphics help section :) www.zoggles.co.uk has some brill non-habbo tutorials.

Oh, ahah sorry 5/10 p.s it's hard to explain but try and make the hair more 'smoother' around the edges. Take a look at a habbo for adaption.

its as he has outlined the hair wrong =]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c3...oshop/here.png

zoom into that and see how i have removed some 'black lines' dont make the lines for anything habbo related go to each other unless needed, anyway zoom in to see what i mean...

Yes it looks more realistic now, You beat me to it, darn!

Thanks for the comments.