My Habbo Building - Improved

I took some of your tips and advice and improved my work.
I'm still not that happy with it although your comments and stuff helped me be a bit more confident and proud :)

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y21...onimproved.png

this is my improved version. I think theres still a bit more to be done?
ideas, advice, comments and help all welcomed xD

WOW..... JUST WOW!!!!!!!!!! and.... +rep x] how long it take u

few days for making the other one and a few days for improving it?

WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

The roofs [sp?] look too plain, maybe add like a swimming pool or something?

EDIT: Also the corner nearest the front seems wrong. The wall either side has two shades of yellow whereas the corner only has one, also the direction it is going looks impossible :s

Thats awesome Steph! ;D

Nice 8/10

10/10

Love It! This Probably Sounds Stupid But What Abbout Animating It? Mabye A Lift Or Somthing?

I agree with Smiffla, the roofs (yeah, that's how you spell it) seem a bit too plain. Add a swimming pool, or like pipes comming out of the top, the the air-conditioning pipes, and a way to get to the top of the building.
Like this kinda stuff.
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a1...y/building.jpg

Just noticed too, where is says "Habbo Mall' the 'b's are backwards