First ever habbo layout

Un coded and what not, tis my first ever layout, followed a tutorail but it looks different to the finished result of the tutorial, the three habbo's are the owners of Habbo Legend (me and two friend), c&c rate out of 10 ect

http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/5...outcopyel2.png

No offence but ewwwww
Bad colours
Not atall aligned
cut down on the white surrounding its annoying

i kinda like it, but i wouldnt buy it

The colours are very unattractive, and the font in the headers is to cramed and way to thick. Characters at the bottom dont go very well... 7/10 Good for a first try though.:)

Guessing by the looks of it you used animiks tutorial?

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Originally Posted by -Xperience

The colours are very unattractive, and the font in the headers is to cramed and way to thick. Characters at the bottom dont go very well... 7/10 Good for a first try though.:)

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Any colour you suggest (a yellow), I'll cut down th white now, and I wasn't complete sure about the charaters, shall I get rid of them?
Yes I used that tutorial.

Blues tend to be the basic colours of most websites so maybe try shades ofr green and blue mixed together or a soft yellow and blue. Use a habboish font, either volter or Visitor BRK www.dafont.com. Experiment with different shapes of the boxes too :)

Poor, sorry.

Horrible colour.

Is the tutorial from animik.ca?

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Originally Posted by FrozenWhisper

Any colour you suggest (a yellow), I'll cut down th white now, and I wasn't complete sure about the charaters, shall I get rid of them?
Yes I used that tutorial.

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Yes he did.

The text on the Names of the Boxes is way to small. I couldn't evan read that atall. And add backround maybe and use a different green or different colour as i odnt really like that =]
But good try.