Bookshelf by XBladerX

heres a bookshelf i made i based it on this: http://www.ikea.com/webapp/wcs/store...umber=40068154
WIP1:
http://i15.tinypic.com/2rbyqea.png
WIP2:
http://i15.tinypic.com/3zjfaxt.png
Finished product:
http://i9.tinypic.com/2m7yger.png
plz rate and C&C plz

0/10 for wip 1
8.5/10 for wip 2
0/10 for finished version because

YOU FORGOT THOSE DAMN VBLACK LINES AGAINNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!

sorry but you just wind me up with that and my alarm just goes off

I like the second one better. The finished one dosent look habbo like.

8/10 w.i.p. 2
6/10 finished version because you should add black lines to make it more habbo like

imo, last one is best.
it actually looks like a normal dresser; without the black lines.
i mean, do real bookshelfs have black lines? not really.

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Originally Posted by exposure!

imo, last one is best.
it actually looks like a normal dresser; without the black lines.
i mean, do real bookshelfs have black lines? not really.

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get ontopic... its not about real dressers its about what goes with habbo

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Originally Posted by exposure!

imo, last one is best.
it actually looks like a normal dresser; without the black lines.
i mean, do real bookshelfs have black lines? not really.

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I will state arguments through your sentances;

1) No it is not.
2) Habbo is not "normal" it is a virtual game that uses thick cartoon like outlines
3) No, they do not. But do real people have funny bodys, one inch long legs like habbo states?
4) I cant argue with that, although what you are saying is easily argumentative, you are correct.

:8

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Originally Posted by siz

0/10 for wip 1
8.5/10 for wip 2
0/10 for finished version because

YOU FORGOT THOSE DAMN VBLACK LINES AGAINNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!

sorry but you just wind me up with that and my alarm just goes off

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If your a "Graphic designer" you should know that things don't need black lines as long as they have a dark colour outline.
You can look at loads of good pixel art and see that most don't have black lines.

Hmm, not bad, be the last version doesn't look habbo like, and I'm wondering, does it even fit in a habbo room?
I think there's something wrong with the shades aswell, but I don't care, my shades aren't perfect either. :)

8/10

It's good, but as said before I like the WIP 2 better than the finished one... it just doesn't look quite right.

And as for the actual Ikea bookcase... it's very boring and I certainly wouldn't pay that much to buy it ^_^

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Originally Posted by Cptn.kewl

If your a "Graphic designer" you should know that things don't need black lines as long as they have a dark colour outline.
You can look at loads of good pixel art and see that most don't have black lines.

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You should realise it is habbo art that uses black outlines.

However,
if it was pixel art, where it would be possible to not use black outlines, then it would not be in the section. :)