me Child Abuse poem

k its kinda random. Pls rate/comment. I aint a great poem writer but I do like to do the odd one when I get incredibly bored.

Please Mum don’t hurt me,
Please Mum don’t kick,
Please Mum don’t hit me,
It’s making me sick.

Please Dad, don’t join in,
Please Dad not you,
Please Dad don’t do anything,
Please don’t do it too.

Please will you stop it Mum,
Please stop it Dad,
Please, I really hate it,
You’re making me sad.

If you’re not going to stop,
Finish me here,
I’m just not worth it,
And I’m full with fear.

You both just said no
You want me as a slave
I thought I was your daughter
I can’t be this brave.

I’ll do it myself, I thought in my head,
So I sneaked downstairs to find me a knife,
I cried and I screamed… and shouted help,
The last thing you’ll hear from me, it’s the end of my life.

thats sad :(

Thats a really good poem.
+REP

Thanks<3

Thats well good <3. It's really sad though. 10/10 +rep

Thank you<3

a nice peom, emotional n all, +rep

umm. is that true? like were u abused or something.

That poem is so nice... you should lengthen the ending however.

Goodluck with the rest of your Poem Journeys!

-Chaz


+Rep if i can.

I am loving the ending.
+REP for making me less bored
:)