On my own (poem) (Time : 2 mins)

I sit on my own,
I sit all alone,
No-one notices me,
They never care to see,
They don’t care about me.

I play on my own,
I play all alone,
No-one notices me,
They never care to see,
They don’t care about me.

I walk on my own,
I walk all alone,
No-one notices me,
They never care to see,
They don’t care about me.

I live my life on my own,
I live my life all alone,
No-one notices me,
The never care to see,
The don’t care about me.

I sit and think on my own,
I think all alone,
Its hard to know that I am dead,
But no-one would have a tear to shed.

Bit miserable, but it's pretty good, I like the rhythm.

I no, i find sad things easier to write, because you can add more expression.

Lol cool in just 2 mins!!!!
Well we all say random things in a short space of time!!! Well done!!!
:D

read my story too :P took me around 5 minutes. it aint finished

Im on my own
with a grown
and a moan
but then i got my best bud ray
but he always says what a day
so sit in the dark
eating a piece of bark
so i say goodbye world
and i go curlled like a hedgeog

but i know whats happeneing
its this time of year
the japaniezz bomb us
and end all our carrer
so i hide away
but they catch me
and send me away
in may
and locked in a celler for 55 years
just looking at the clock by the time i die with all thoes fears

On my own
noone can tell
how someone hit me
but then i fell
calapised on the floor
for 18 hours
in the dark

I was sick
felt like 1 million times
died of an illness
but spirit was alive
died for my live

HAHA what a funky little poem that is.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Skibs.

I sit on my own,
I sit all alone,
No-one notices me,
They never care to see,
They don’t care about me.

I play on my own,
I play all alone,
No-one notices me,
They never care to see,
They don’t care about me.

I walk on my own,
I walk all alone,
No-one notices me,
They never care to see,
They don’t care about me.

I live my life on my own,
I live my life all alone,
No-one notices me,
The never care to see,
The don’t care about me.

I sit and think on my own,
I think all alone,
Its hard to know that I am dead,
But no-one would have a tear to shed.

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Its good nd cute, well done, about 8.9/10

Quote:

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I sit eating bark

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<---- who eats bark, yucky :(