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Looking great, BUT...
- The edge of the walls are still grey. you need to colour it the same colour as your walls.
- The yellow trim on the windows looks odd.
- The bar has lots of pixel errors on the blue line at the top closest to us.
- The speaker has a dodgy line at the top left corner.
- The seats look wierd for some strange reason.
- Next to the seat on the far left the line on the floor suddenly stops.
- Pretty much most of the lines on the floor are varying of width.
- The "Edge" of the room is still green. you need to colour it to the colour of the floor.
- The door looks a bit flat as there is no width.
- The glass floor needs a black outline.
Sort those out and it'll be improved greatly. Promising start though.
6/10
^^ Well noticed above...
And Yep I like this alot It will be really good if you incorporate the information above... +REP
Cola your really good :) but it's my 1st BIG alt.
i quite like it
do take colas advice in hand
7/10
Theres pixel errors all over the place, and things out of line, Not alot of time put into this. 6/10
Seen most of that stuff before :) but i cant prove it
Its those seats, someone made them. I cant remeber who and i cant find them but ive seen them before
the seats are blader boys but i recoloured them and put on this alt because they loom fab, i hope he doesent get mad :>
The colours to me look to inverted.
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Originally Posted by Psych.
Same, and why is there a black tile next to the stools [middle and far right]