My First Alt, Pls Rate..

This Alteration Is Meant To Be A Coffee Table With A Newspaper And Coffee On It. Its My First One So I Dont Think It Will Be Very Good.

http://img476.imageshack.us/img476/3...eetableru2.png
By The Way I Didnt Draw The Coffee Table, I Took It Of Habbo

umm as im a pro i feel its my job to help u
1. its rubbish
2. wheres the shadin?
3. to small
4. what is it
5. use better colours

2/10

(official rating from a pro alt artist)

good try tho

It's ok and it's something to work from. Your next step would be to create a table of your own, because it doesn't look like you've done much. :)

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Originally Posted by Lmao

umm as im a pro i feel its my job to help u
1. its rubbish
2. wheres the shadin?
3. to small
4. what is it
5. use better colours

2/10

(official rating from a pro alt artist)

good try tho

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I BURST OUT LAUGHING AT THAT LMAO LMAO LMAO

7.10 for the alt:P

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Originally Posted by Lmao

umm as im a pro i feel its my job to help u
1. its rubbish
2. wheres the shadin?
3. to small
4. what is it
5. use better colours

2/10

(official rating from a pro alt artist)

good try tho

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dont listen to lmao hes a nub coz he cant do simple alterations.

as for yours it could do with a bit more shading but for a first try its very good so 7/10 +rep keep trying and youll get alot better

Thanks For Your Comments Everybody. I Will Work On My Alts :)

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Originally Posted by ::j-2k6::

Thanks For Your Comments Everybody. I Will Work On My Alts :)

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yeah u need to put effort in ur alts..

Edited by Nixt (Forum Moderator): when criticising alterations, please do so constructively or not at all, thanks :).

lmao go find a different forum to mess up j-2k6 has put more effort into this than all of your baby rubbish alts

It's Ok. 6/10.
1) Shade.
2) Need's To Be Bigger.
Good Try, Don't Listen To LMAO.

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Originally Posted by Lmao

umm as im a pro i feel its my job to help u
1. its rubbish
2. wheres the shadin?
3. to small
4. what is it
5. use better colours

2/10

(official rating from a pro alt artist)

good try tho

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Ignore this user, he isn't pro and deffinately isn't correct.

It is a good alt for a first, especially on the scale you've made it, which is sometimes a challenge making small furniture. All it really needs is shading on the paper and possibly making the pens a bit more, well, realistic. Maybe longer? If it is a fountain pen then you could add a cold or siler line on one side to show the hook bit on a fountain pen (not sure what it is called).