All My Latest Work

This is just all my latest work over the last few days, and one peice from quite long ago, rate /10 and please state which individual peice you're rating, hope ya like it.

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http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/6786/kth8.png

http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/8166/habbobusan4.png

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http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/4...crowaveyc0.png

I like the bus & radio. :)

Cheers, I think I need abit more shade on the bus though, just as the finishing touch :)

I like the way the guy is sleeping through "mega bass."

The two scenes have some good features but these look like copy & pastes from other pictures etc. There are many pixel errors and a lot of parts aren't icometric. Some things look weird such as the commuter's extended arm. Also, both pictures need a lot of shading.

The bus is a very good attempt. However, it deffinately needs shading as you mentioned and it could do with a few curved corners rather than right-angles. The black outline is too thick and the overall vehicle lacks detail such as lights and interior through the windows etc. The wheels aren't isometric and top of the stairs looks wrong because the corner of the "railing" is level with the corner of the bus. this should not be the case as the barrier (which is nearer to us) is a certain distance away from the wall of the bus (the stairs width), so the corner of this railing would be more to the left. (You should just pull the railings away from the back wall, along the right edge of the bus).

Note:
› when I say "railing", I am referring to the red wall that stops you falling down the stairs.
› left/right is as we are looking at it.

It would be nice if you added the bus to the above roadside scene too. :)

The final two alterations are not bad. The radio is good but a little on the big side. The cooker is good but the hobs aren't isometric and the same with the dish inside the microwave.

Overall, I see you have put a lot of effort into this work so I'll give 8/10. I see you have trouble making circles icometric but keep practicing and you'll improve. ;)

Any chance at a glimpse of some WIP? I may consider some rep if so. :8

The shadow of the dog is a little strange and everything needs more detail and shading.
Nice effort -
8/10
PN x