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My mind is blank
But when my thoughts trail off
To her...
When I hear her voice
And see her face
My heart starts thumping
And then it stops
When I just know
She doesn’t love me back
And all I can do is either
Cry
Or
Be brave
This is the first draft, tell me what you think, thanks :)
Good, confused at the use of "her" yet you are a girl. Minor detail.
Actually very nice. My favourite poem of yours yet.
Thanks and I thought her sounded better than him.
:)
For a depressing one it was good.
But I don't like anything depressing.
Posi or nothing.
Thanks :)
Sorry about an earlier comment saying "I actually like it." It's just i'm quite used to moaning at you for "depressing poems."
Uh thanks..
I think
:)
It's a compliment.
Oooh okay :)
How nice you are
;D
I have got another non-depressing poem y'know.
thats a nice one