My first ever alt

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y26...n/untitled.bmp
Out of 10

p.s dont it ages ago

Ok for a first alt, I dont do alts myself so I cant really say how to improve it but 4/10

Erm..yeah...what exactly is it supposed to be? Two carribean people french kissing?

Lack of detail.
No shading.
Can't read the text above image.

2/10

ok i no it your 1st alt and i cant say nothing because i am terrible at alts but.. it doesn't look alot of effot is put into it. 5/10

Im sorry dude my grandmother can do a beter job than that..they dont even look like habbos. 2 caribean people with extreamly long toungs french kissing :p 0/10