Habbo Tramp

This is the re-design of the Habbo paper boy, it took me about 10 mins, this is also my third alteration, enjoy. Post what i could improve.http://www.uploadz.co.uk/615blablajhh.png

the line of the shorts, its going straight

Yeh, that was a little bit of a error i forgot about. I was gonna make different alt so i put that there, i forgot to put it off.

To be honest I don't like it but keep trying it will get better 4/10

why is there black all over his face. i havnet seen many tramps like that :P pixel error in the hair and the hair its self is too basic, a blonde tramp with pristine hair wouldnt happen soz, dont like tbh. 4/10

Not 1 of the best ive seen...

Looks to me as if you just coloured in a few bits in black..

Hmm.. 6/10

Sorry, but to me the work is pretty average.. xO
What I suggest you do is add shading if your going to color his face black.

I'm not sure what the black part is but try and make sure theres shading to your additional details. http://ms.vis.ne.jp/t/v.gif

Umm tis ok but not best ive seen .. +rep for atempet tho 5/10

I dont think it is very good did you just paint it?

Looks like a coal miner ^^