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I took T0MM0's advice and made a Catalogue Page and a Classroom with the shading advice given by Siz:
I've added some extra furni too (the bell and the teachers portrait)
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g2...nTaru/Room.png
Link: http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/RasputenTaru/Room.png
I couldn't be bothered making smaller versions of the furni, so I just shrunk them:
I was right in the mood for slating the hell out of an alt but I can't really find anything blatantly wrong with this. The only thing I would comment on is being more adventurous. You've used the same desk and chair 6 times over. Maybe do some books on top or some pens or even a chemistry set. Overall, really nice. And I'm so proud of you to stop using black lines inside of alts. XD
I think you should move the "old School" text higher up. It just doesn't look right there
owow thats REALLY good
I know, on my past recent catalogue alts, I've been moving things about to give the page an updated look, it put it there cause I wanted it so overlap with the desk, but I still wanted there to be enough distance from the top of the page, so I just stuck it thereQuote:
Originally Posted by iSuck
*Double Post* :S
Took your advice again and reworked them :P, just added some little touches:
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g2...aru/Room-1.png
Link: http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/RasputenTaru/Room-1.png
That's really nice, you've made the room fit the furniture and the teacher nicely. It's quite the collection.
much better.
I actually was gonna add another thing, but I could edit it cause it had been longer than 15 minutes :S, so here it is :P (No point in having the full alt)Quote:
Originally Posted by Agesilaus
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g2...Taru/Dunce.png
Don't like the dunce hat to be honest. Don't look positioned right. (I am never happy amirite?)