Habbo Catalouge SCHOOL SECTION W.I.P

http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/f...inprogress.png

So yeah this is my Work In Progress
Please give me tips on what to improve and such and rate it so far :)

Thanks

I would put the image in the middle instead of randomly to the side.

Its pretty cool tbh :)
Well done

Add the chair legs!! :)
Maybe design your own header/banner what ever you wanna call it?
Also maybe make the range too

Chair legs and feet.

And bring the image a bit more < LEFT.

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Originally Posted by dbgtz

Add the chair legs!! :)
Maybe design your own header/banner what ever you wanna call it?
Also maybe make the range too

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I will continue with it all tomorrow :)
This is it so far....
http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/f...progress-1.png

Actually, becuse habbo is... istrometic it does not look normal
with that.. habbo school boy sticker.
Otherwise its pretty good.

I was gonna put a coment then my dad started talking to me... So i forgot. but yh nice alt ;) Oh i remember, the 5credits thing shud be in the centerish? ive im correct. (If im not just say :D) lol

yh 8/10 so far :P

Okay, time for an analysis.
Criticism:

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A) Why is the image at the side?
B) The table feet and pointed and look sharp? No no no.
C) Why is the table's perspective off? If you want a perspective like that, you'll have to add shading on the habbo to make it seem like a Vanishing point perspective.
D) The legs at the back of the VPP Table are longer then the front legs. I suggest you change that.
E) Is the dude cut in half ;-; Poor guy :3

Good Points:

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A) Interesting perspective.
B) The table itself (the isometric one) Is actually pretty good, just not the items on it.
C) The colors fit well.

Improve on the bad points to make it better.

3 Stars ***

He's magically floating, WOW.
A bit off centre, don't you think..

- TomSpit