Her life [Poem]

It's not that good, jut spur of the moment...

Her life was so perfect,
It all fit into place,
She was so happy – so many smiles on her face,
She was beginning to fit in;
With the crowd,
She was starting to feel ever so proud,
She got hooked up with a guy,
She knew he was a prat,
I never understood why she ever did that,
Like a blink of an eye,
She was P*cking her bags – saying goodbye,
She was into his place without consideration,
Her mother cried in pure desperation,
‘Why leave now? Why for that guy?’
Her mother cried – and painfully sighed…
So many tears fell on that day,
She was lost on what to say…

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For some reason is censors the word
Pa-c-k-
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Great poem, it really has the emotional factor (As I like to call it)
10/10 +rep :)
(The word is filtered because the beginning letters, P A C and K could be written as a racist comment, I'm sure you know which word I mean...)

Great poem, really touching to some :)
9/10 Wd =]

It isn't quite finished yet, and i know what you mean hehe