Aplication help

can any one help with my application plz i need feedback
listen to me clip HERE http://audio.habboupload.com/1221713097.mp3

can you give me any tips???

thankx
oli1122

it sounds rly good, idk what tips.

you need to mae urself stand out, full of enthusiasm and energy, make sure your not reading from a script it needs to sound natural :)

Good luck with your app xx

It does sound really good as Hana said, but a few things to note is to turn your mic up a wee bit, because it's very quiet. Also as Hanna said sound like you've just drunk 5 cups of coffee not just taken an overdose of Sleeping Pills :D Try to sound like your getting them pumped up and ready to party.

And good luck when Applications Open :D

I wouldn't say 5 cups of coffee, just cheery like u rlyy wanna dj. If you don't sound happy, the listners won't be happy ;)

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Originally Posted by SUPERhanna.

it sounds rly good, idk what tips.

you need to mae urself stand out, full of enthusiasm and energy, make sure your not reading from a script it needs to sound natural :)

Good luck with your app xx

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That's really good advice because atm that clip sounds like what a lot of people send in and although it's not bad it's not going to stand out.

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Originally Posted by SUPERhanna.

I wouldn't say 5 cups of coffee, just cheery like u rlyy wanna dj. If you don't sound happy, the listners won't be happy ;)

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5 cups is far too much...

I would say just make sure you have fun and sound like your having fun! :)

don't try and sound like you've drank loads of coffee sound happy, make sure the speech is clear and just be yourself. :) Goodluck

Good application, but back off from the mic a bit. :P