Cheese!

Yes. Well it's 5:45am and I was bored and I was eating cheese so I attempted a rubbish alt of cheese I done one normal and one with shading this is my first try at shading and it's terrible! so rate it out of 10 and give come constructive critisim.
Thanks you

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y24...ade/cheese.png

MORE HOLES! Lmao!! 8/10

Lmao!
Thanks.
It's my first ever proper thingo
Although I'm new to this, I still need some tutorials<3

Odd... cheese :p
8/1o randish idea..

I want cheeeseeeee
Give me the cheese please? O=]
But yeah, it looks like it could do with a hole or two in the middle :o

I'd say much more holes too :o and more shading. 7/10 :p

...How annoying, everything I wanted to say has been said, Mer!
Well anyhoo, more shading, it doesn't look right, and there are only holes around the outside...

rofl cheese :)

It's cool I LOVE cheese! 8/10

Mmm Cheeeese! :D
Its pretty good :)
I'll give you an 8/10
Nice job! :-]