My Old House (Small but important update)

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As Ekalb said, I should keep all copy and paste down to a minimum, which I have done by removing most C+P and leaving only the characters as C+P,

I was going to post it in the old thread but i couldn't find it.

The main update here is on the windows and wood Floor.

Thank You, Please give me as much constructive criticism as possible so I can improve, also the roof cannot be made any straighter, i tied but no luck

Yours Sincerely,
Siz.

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9/10 because the chimney looks to flat

+rep

Um.. The beige, light yellow w/e looks weird.. Kinda ruins it.
The rest is great though :)

it looks good but its missing a little umph, its to plain, maybe add window sills with plants on and a Gutter on the roof? then you should make a garden :D Still 9/10 though 1 is the missing umph.

The inside of the chimney should be dark.

Also try to put a shading on the house like 1 side darker than the other side so it will look more realistic. And ye I think if you put a lil more detail in the yellow bits like dunno some texture than it will look great.

And I hope you will be planning to add a garden etc :)

Good luck looking good so far! :)

Yeah, I don't like the top of the chimney. It's not very chimney like.

Isn't the roof wonky?

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Originally Posted by Nikki

9/10 because the chimney looks to flat

+rep

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No it doesn't, It looks a bit thin at the top - that's all.

I think you should add more into the garden instead of just a really big green area. :) +rep

Looks really good.
Well done

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Originally Posted by Holofoil

Isn't the roof wonky?

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He's already said that he can't make it any straighter? Read the post!